the descriptions are long and some grammar mistakes... but this story's really good!

Let me guess, Kyoko is Sendoh's long-lost sister? This fic is very nicely done. I watched the three Ring movies and it creeped me out. But the third movie was sad, making me feel very sorry for Sadako.

Anyway, keep it up and hopefully this is updated.

Yey! An update! I was waiting for this... Nice chappie by the way. So Kenji and Kyoko ain't really siblings? Hm that makes their reactions to each other even more interesting... Please do continue!

I'm glad that you updated! I've been waiting for the next installment. This is really nice by the way. This chapter illustrates quite well that you are more than capable of balancing plot aspects with character development cohesively and articulately. The parts in this chapter that are meant to challenge the reader's perception of their reality do just that - they manage to stay 'wonderfully weird' without falling into 'pointlessly nonsense'.
This whole fic is like a bunch of layers, all of which are undeniably complex, and all are well thought-out thoroughly and carefully, making this nothing short of a fantastic story.
Although I'd prefer if this wouldn't be yaoi/shonen-ai(their are far too many yaoi fics in this section anyway), I'd still read this anyhow.
Please do continue!

Really! I'm getting creeped out... But still, continue please! You've got an interesting OC by the way. I'm glad she's not marysue-ish, you know? I also admire your writing style; the way you write just make the scenes real. Like I said, it's creeping me out, hehe, but I'm fascinated anyway. I'm looking forward for the next chapter!

Omg... is it Sendoh's body!

Come on, updatee!

haha! flamingly beautiful hair! hehe...

i like kyoko! :)

-danes-

Suspense! Suspense! It's killing me! What DID Kyoko n co. see? Sometimes, i really hate cliffhangers!

Anyway, yeah, you ARE inproving. The plot is becoming more and more intriguing and full of suspense and certain parts are kinda freaky as well..

So Kiyota and Jin are the ones spreading the video tape around. WHat happened to them? Did they die? What's so special about Rukawa? Damn...I told you i do hate suspense...but then again, that's what makes a story interesting! It makes the reader want to read the next chapter!

Hurry, update!

Wow...great story. Glad you included Jin, Rukawa, Fujima, and Sendoh! Sorry, I'm just too obsessed with them. Gomen for not reviewing your previous chap. I was going to, but forgot. And school's finals are coming up. Grr...

Peace~

yep...

this chapter fits the title... Intrigue and Terror.

You describe things well. Your description of Sadako made her seem so realistic and sent chills creeping up my spine.

Why Kyoko was called 2 Shohoku? What is so special bout Shohoku?

Nailess fingers, eh? I didn't notice Sadako had nailess fingers in the movie... Must have looked like fingers with patches of bare, raw flesh... ugh.

Anyway, do update soon... can't wait 4 ur next chappie!

oh, i can just imagine all the stuff you wrote... :D great work! keep goin...

by the way, the recipe fic was taken down [don't ask] if you want to see further updates, check out this site:

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i haven't updated yet, though. :) want me to mail you if i've updated any of my stories? could i have your email addie?

in turn, could you mail me when you've updated your fic?

arigato!

-mskitsune-

Hey cous! I see Rukawa! haha... same old Rukawa... and another HEY! are you serious in killing all the cute S.D. guys? um... papatayin mo b tlaga cla? hay... just answer this in your e-mail... ne? hehe... I demand for your update! joke! .~

Wow! Cool idea to write a crossover between these two.. So please continue! It's very interesting!

Hey, this is cool! I luv horror fics! Yeah, I really liked The Ring even if it wasn't that scary, you know, it just kept me in suspense throughout the whole movie, I really wanted to knwo what was going to happen.

When i read the 1st part of ur fic, I thought that Kyoko was Sadako or sumthin like that, an d I thought that that was a bit too sudden and so un-Sadako-like...

I nearly laughed my guts out when I read on, it was only Fujima's sister! You are beginning to write a little like R. , and that kiddie Goosebumps series I used to read when i was little. Fake scares that freak you out at first...

Continue!

Wow. I'm sure something IS starting to happen here. And I think the girl from the well's next victim is Mitsui. But what happened to Fujima? Why did he get drunk? I thought he's not an alcoholic person and will never EVER drink? Will Jin, Rukawa, or Sendoh appear in the next chap? Ahh, can't wait for them to make their entrance!

Peace~