Reviews for Hogwarts Protection System
themadmartian chapter 1 . 5/5
Awesome story, I'll add this to my story favorites.
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gbttown1 chapter 1 . 3/5
Enjoy safety and security in your home with HPS!
The #1 security system in Britain!
gabzep chapter 1 . 2/22
Thank you Sorting Hat!
Mercutio chapter 1 . 1/4
I really liked this story. What an original plot device! I'm glad to see an excuse to get Amelia Bones involved in the case. She seemed like one of the more effective people in the books, even if she never got much face time.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
Im gonna be honst i got so upset by the difference in treatment of ron the son of an auror and the son of a death eater that i stopped reading. Next time please note the slytherin bashing and prekudice thank you slso you got madam bones wrong she should be fair and not judgemental like she was in the first few paragraphs alone
RevDorothyL chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
Lovely! If only there HAD been those sorts of protections active . . .
Veronice chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
Most enjoyable. You do realise that you have managed to solve Harry's problems and get rid of Voldy in under 16,000 words instead of Rowling's roughly one and a half million words?
moonprincess97524 chapter 1 . 11/2/2019
love this wonderful wonderful story.
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Bene Factum
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
A definite improvement on how it went in canon. I'd love to have seen what the hat caught the next year...
csheila chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Excellent. Well written and great plot.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
Thanks for your time and talents
StupidChinaBook chapter 1 . 6/6/2019
I thought the Mckinnon daughter was called Marlene NOT Melinda?
Ash chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
Thanks for the story. I really like the idea of such protection! And also how Harry was healed and watched by bones, croaker, Gunter and his correspondence with Susan and the House changes. I do not like Jebson... I like how he finds Sirius, the Tonks and the end where Dumbledore only has to close his mouth.
Olddantrucker chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
This is hard to read. Normal format is to have it be two shorter chapters.
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