What is at the same time awesome and awful with this fic, is the fact that every new day in the story you tell yourself : 'Wow... what a shitty day Judy just had, but at least it's over now and will never be worse...'
But NO! Every single day is darker than the one before.
Anyway, great story. Keep it up! :)

Okay i am lost here? wasn't this story complete? Not that I don't like it or anything. I have reread this story many times. just trying to understand. Are you rewriting some parts?

$!# now i have to brain bleach this story with a bunch of fluff
To stop thinking about it .:(

That can’t be the end?!

will there be a continuation of this story? I mean what happened to nick you can't just make it look like he was eaten. he is a fox they are very intelligent animal and I am pretty sure nick would have found a way to save his self. I just don't get it half the story was with them and then you literally left us hanging. Not that this story isn't good it has a very interesting plot I just hoped they would stay together or at least find one anthor.

What happened to Nick?!

great story. though I hope you find time or the inspiration to continue it

Finally complete?

I don't get the reference, I never played half-life. Damn. What I want to ask is whether or not you'll be continuing this universe but in a separate story? I hope so, but if not then I just wanted you to know that even though I haven't reviewed before, I've loved every word or this story. Definitely one of my favorites. Thanks for sharing!

Great chapter and endin mark, keep it up! No wonder I didn't know what was goin on ya made this like Half-Life of which I've never played and don't know anything about. Anyway Judy did the right thing savin that families life after she talked to that rodent that snapped her mind back into place it seems. I only wonder what she's gonna do now that she's stuck in this place.

Why do people leave a comment like that. I mean nick will come around. Might take a bit, but let it happen. Stop complaining. Read another fic in the mean time. So peace out and keep it up

...So what happened with Nick?

I'm sorry what the hell just happened where are we

Where the fuckity fuck is Nick? This dumb idiot author just wants to write about judy as a hero again while leaving Nick in the dark. Holy fuck, you judy virgin fanboys are just a fucking waste of space. This braindead guy, 2 reviews below me going "kEeP iT uP" like a retard. He is just doesn't realize.

Hmmmmm