| Reviews for Destiny |
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   Fredrickson the 96th chapter 2 . 5/22/2018 Alright now, how do I properly describe this mix of emotions I'm feeling right now... First off, this story was awesome in every way and it was a brilliant set-up for a retake on vol. 4 with Pyrrha still being alive. It's just so damn sad, that you obviously gave up on it! Your last update is now a whole year back and the A/N you left in the end there made it sound so certain that you would continue. This story has so much potential to grow into something really big and beautiful! It's just so very disappointing to see it end like this... |
| Fredrickson the 96th chapter 1 . 5/22/2018 Man, that was captivating as hell! I loved this so far! I'm actually already sad that there's only one more chapter... |
| bigmike20 chapter 2 . 8/20/2017 Really good story so far. Hope you continue it. Really looking forward to see how close you keep this to canon material. |
| DaleJr.88 chapter 2 . 6/7/2017 Great chapter, I'm loving on how things are starting to happen. I'm looking forward to reading more from you soon. |
| DaleJr.88 chapter 1 . 6/7/2017 Good start, it was sad to see Pyrrha dying in the volume 3 finale, glad to see that she'll be alive in the story. |
| yomunot chapter 2 . 5/31/2017 Prose is good, just a few grammatical errors here and there. Characters aren't OOC. This is pretty good! I look forward to the next update |
| yomunot chapter 1 . 5/30/2017 Oh hot damn, that was pretty good. |
| TheDemonicSaint chapter 2 . 5/25/2017 I can dig this, keep it up! If you get framers telling you that making a volume 4 with Pyrrha alive is unoriginal and stupid, I feel I must remind you that ALL fanfiction is unoriginal and a lot of it is stupid. I'm just looking for some well written wish fulfillment and this fits the profile |
| Solvdrage chapter 2 . 5/25/2017 Very solid start. Love the introspection from Pyrrha. Qrow was spot on. Excited for the Arkos conversation. Definitely earned a fav. |
| Patriot-112 chapter 2 . 5/24/2017 Well done, hope to see more in the future. |
| dracohalo117 chapter 2 . 5/24/2017 Good story so far, I like how you have set this up, not so much a fix-fic, shows Pyrrha will have some hardships ahead of her. dracohalo117 |
| Pancakes1708 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Really good start here hope you continue this |
| ScrubLord97 chapter 1 . 5/22/2017 Beautifully done, and a nice touch on Pyrrha bleeding from her shoulder, as well as how Jaune reacted in the way he did with first aid by immediately detaching himself as he began working quickly. Cannot wait to see what more you have in store on the next chapter |
| gothboy.wxlf chapter 1 . 5/16/2017 I'm also looking forward to your next update. I like the way you started it too! |
| trs7294 chapter 1 . 5/16/2017 So great! I really loved how you reimagined it |
