This was fabulous and very moving - just the ending we had all been waiting for. Thank you so much!

Sorry just now reading - busy at work and excited for this update. Sorry we made you feel bad - doesn’t mean we don’t love your writing. I am glad you think outside the box :) you have a great imagination.

Excellent update and I love how you protrayed their lives and fun Hawaii - you didn’t have research that part :). And her and Mary’s conversation was great. Love how Sybil got the inheritance.

Thanks for writing. I am very much looking forward to betrayal :).

That was simply lovely. I loved how you took them through time and we watched them age gracefully and happily, because they loved each other so much. Excuse me, I’m just going to grab a tissue; I think there’s something in my eye,

This is actually one of my favorites, and doesn’t need an epilogue, although I think we all just wanted you to keep the story going because we can’t bear to see it end. We readers are selfish that way, lol.

I won't lie and say that I was a little bit disappointed to see the story ending so quickly. I thought we would see them get friend again but it was a lovely story and I can't wait to see the epilogie that will fill the gapes I'm sure. x

Think you wrapped all this up too quickly at the end otherwise it was lovely.

Some quite deep thoughts here! Very interesting final chapter though I do think we need the epilogue to fill in some of the gaps, particularly the presumable changed attitude of Mrs Branson towards Sybil. Well written as always though!

Excellent. I was on the edge of my seat at the beginning. That was very deep - your focus on decisions we make and the past and present. Very true. I think I would have liked more details like Sybil breaking it off with that guy ; her families reaction ; how the Branson's came around obviously ; did Sybil get a job at a hospital in Dublin and minor is Mary married to Matthew and have George and Edith with Bertie and Marigold. But to be honest what you were focused on - decisions we make and what you said about past present and it making us who we are was better and I loved how you did it. Who would have thought I could get thought provoking real life answers that are comforting from fiction. Thanks for writing and I look forward to the next. xo.

Perfection, just perfection. Thank you for giving us such a lovely happy ending to what has been a riveting reworking of their story. Greatly looking forward to the epilogue.

I read this in one sitting last night. I have a perverse love for stories in which Sybil turns Tom down and then pines/regrets years later. This definitely hits all the emotional points. I absolutely love that Tom becomes a bit of a restless wandered. So fitting, I think. Can't wait to see where you take this!

Lovely, really lovely story. Love these two and how you write them.

So near...but still worried in case there should be 'and yet so far' added to that, great to see this story updated and back with a fabulous will they/won't they...i don't care if they always do it's just great reading about it!

Our happy ending is just round the corner - hopefully! Tom had better be nice as it was all his fault for upping sticks and leaving her. Love this story and longing for your next update!

Go on Sybil, you are almost there with Tom! What a place to stop! Brilliant chapter - beautifully written as always.

Oh man I can't believe you stop it there - I didn't even realize it was the end of the chapter. And great job tricking us last chapter - it wasn't Sybil 's taxi that broke down. Love how she got lost walking and saw the truck. Canno wait till the next chapter. Loved it. Thanks for writing.