Aren't they adorable?! It is so good!

"I'd like his opinion on our forbidden romance." Well, that's one way to silence questions. XD When Riza went to ask Roy for help, I was thinking he'd use alchemy to repair the zipper (I don't know). I love that he just knew a simple trick from growing up with the girls at Madame Christmas's place. Even with the angst about Riza's tattoo, this was cute!

OH MY GOODNESS. I SWEAR I JUST DIED.

The very moment Riza answered so inteligently to those fangirl-ladies, she recorded a 'turn down for what' on her scoreboard.
In contraposition to that moment, is very beautiful how you portrayed Hawkeye's melancholy when Roy asked about her wellbeing. Impotence running through her veins, as much as sadness and a little bit of fury.
Above all, I fell in love when Riza gave that kiss -and foremost, when she cleaned her lips' trace from Roy's skin. Such a gentile touch! Is so just-her...

I've been reviewing your stories as non-registered and even if I have not left a comment on all of them, I read every fanfic you publish here in fanfiction. You're awesome. Your style is above beautiful. Some kind of prose-verse, but with the best of both of them.

Please give us more Royai,

Hist

So sweet!

Needed this today, and I loved it! I really liked the line where Roy realizes he's looking at his master's daughter and not his captain and vice versa. Like, how often does that perhaps happen between them that isn't shown in the series? Gives me chills.

Just perfect. Too cute as usual.

That was so incredibly sweet! Thanks for sharing!

You write so beautifully. I loved it!