...Wow. I have never read a story that's had me so eager for the next line. There is so much mystery and suspense and potential in what you already have that it's amazing.

It's been awhile since you've updated, but I really hope you decide to come back to this and finish it up. It's my favorite HP stories written by you, and you've written quite a lot.

You are a really great writer, and I don't think your writing is too "formal." Its about time a story actually has their supposed adult characters talk like adults, and even realize that many readers have higher than a 2nd grade reading capacity. So kudos on that note. BTW, I was just wondering if you've ever read the DaVinci Code? Your story kinda reminds me (the whole secret society killing people aspect, not the really plot) of it and i think if you read it you'd enjoy it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Wow!

This story is really dark! keep did you come up w/ the name Certese? okay update soon!