All the characters except for Danny is plain and exist to make him look better and badass. There’s much more to Harry than what he is here—where’s his skills, his brilliant teaching, his struggles? And why is he so bigoted when he’s practically muggle-born himself? It seems like both Harry and Danny are main characters in this, but at this point Danny is apparently the only interesting thing around, which is bullshit.

Pity, though. I liked that it took place after the books and all the episodes.

While I was not fully sure for most of the story, it is something happening at Hogwarts. As history has shown it only has a two out of seven chance of not being tommy boy's fault.

Ah. I like the story, but couldn't put my finger on what was bothering me until now.

You need to trust your readers slightly more. Don't introduce something, and immediately explain everything about it. Pace things out, and release information slowly. If it isn't immediately relevant to the plot, imply it, don't spell it out.

It's a skill that comes with time (trust me, I know), but it can improve the flow greatly, as well as increase the drive for a reader to continue reading more (without having to resort to a cliffhanger).

Regardless, the actual content you have here is great. Definitely continue to write; you have good ideas.

Yep. That was my first guess. Though the actual explanation eludes me, if the canon HP went the same way.

"No ghost has ever escaped the Fenton thermos,"

Even Dan Phantom couldn't escape it, as far as we know; the last we ever saw of him, he had dented the Thermos, but that's all.
Maybe the higher-ups hadn't decided to kill off the show early we could've gotten a conclusion on that, but we don't have a conclusion on so many plot threads it's sickening.

Considering Danny Phantom isn't Amity Park's sole protector anymore - Sam, Tucker, Valerie and Dani should be able to function in Phantom's absence - this really shouldn't endanger that place.
Especially since Danny could just bring the Infini-Map to solve any 'emergency' situations.

Is this post-Disasteroid, or does it ignore the very controversial final episode of a show that didn't deserve the axe it got from higher-ups?

ive read most of your stories and i didnt even realize it! wow, im observant. u make great hp dp crossovers!
your new awe-struck reader,
eeveemaster

This is great! I love it!

Wonderful! ;)

Is the ghost MOLDYSHORT'S GHOST?

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You did an excellent job, that’s a spOoky boi hiding in the trees and I’m feeling the chills. This story is so fun and so well paced ghhhchn

15 years? You won't have a problem for 15 years or so? Is that some kind of hint? xxx

Hey, you considered doing a bit of a prequel fic to this one where it's Sir Nick convincing Danny of the ghost and hogwarts? xxx

Wow, plot twist!
I was actually thinking it would be dan or a completely new ghost, I never expected it to be Voldemort! Great job!

Whoop! great story! thanks! so sad it's over now though...
still, I can't wait for the sequel to come out!