Reviews for The Witch in the North
trouvaille chapter 3 . 5/20/2019
I find this story very promising. I also liked how well written this is. Will you continue this? Please do so.
uqiam chapter 3 . 12/10/2018
Please continue
Basker chapter 2 . 2/12/2018
This chapter made me laugh a lot. I like the Hermione/Robb pairing.
Ohhh the dreams Hermione has sounds fascinating. Is this how she’ll be able to access some magic or knowledge at some point?
I loved that her mother somehow got to glimpse some of the magical world. The connection between mother and child aslways interests me.
I love the Umbers. They sound like a fascinating bunch.
I wonder what’s up with Kolben? Maybe he just is a cold person. Or he has resting bitch face. It’s a thing!
It’s funny how Hermione’s dislike of brooms somehow translates to disliking horses. Doesn’t like to be out of control I guess.
Great chapter
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
It's southern and complexioned, not southron and complected.
Adhara Snow chapter 3 . 7/28/2017
I love this so much!
So you want to be an Author chapter 3 . 7/17/2017
Wow. Really well written! Hoping for more soon!
ReadLikeHermione chapter 3 . 7/8/2017
Great story
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 2 . 6/28/2017
Hermione/Robb sounds good.
Though, like you I 'love' the Stark so I'm very biased.

The problem is...I don't think the Starks normally would consider it because the Umbers are less powerful in both political and in military value, and because they are already loyal to the Starks. Marriages (especially to the heir of a great family) would only be done if the family stood to gain from it. I.e more troops, better relationships, more land etc.

Betrothing her to one of the younger Stark brothers I can see happening...perhaps...if only to keep or improve relationships between the two powerful families. (The Umbers are one of the most powerful families in the north so it would be important to keep them happy) ...but not to the heir. Not unless the Umbers were to have something of great value to proof why they sould deserve the honour i.e...
The only reason why the marriage would be considered is if she actively showed she could use magic or if the Umbers somehow became more powerful...powerful enough to make the marriage important enough.
Knowledge of her previous life (inventions etc) would help a lot here.

In the end...the more the Umbers have to offer they better the chances of a betrothal. Especially to a more powerful house.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2017
This is really good and I'll be super excited if you make it a RobbxHermione story. I wonder when exactly will she show her magic accidentally. I'll patiently wait till you update hopefully soon.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11/2017
Love it!
Ixtapa51 chapter 3 . 6/5/2017
Nice setting, I will follow this closely. I want to see AdulltHermione in action badly ( And some Starks of course ) yet I Like that you are taking your time to give a strong background to the story and the characters...
francisvirus chapter 3 . 6/3/2017
wow, this is so well written and so muc history and stories being revealed, like whoressbane, he soundss awesome
Anna chapter 3 . 6/3/2017
Amazing!
Greatazuredragon chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Nice chapter, good work.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Relative to the Reach. Hightower is the richest, Redwyne has all the ships, Tarly is the Reach's military powerhouse, Florent has more historical prestige, but nobody's as strong at political maneuvering and raw cunning as House Tyrell. The only reason House Tyrell is in power is because they were smart enough to give up the capital of the Reach to Aegon, after Highgarden's owner just died.

Compared to the other Great Houses of Westeros, the Tyrells have contrasting good relationships with their vassal houses (save from some exceptions) and take actual interest on their domain; for instance, the City Watch of Oldtown belongs to them. Should they have problems, the Tyrells still have a foot firm in Highgarden should there be need to regroup.

they use every trick in the book as pragmatically and hard-nosed as possible, they also haven't neglected the roles good PR and soft power can play in advancing your influence without adding people to the "who wants to kill us" list. For all they are actually playing the game as ruthlessly as others, often enough. Loved, somewhat feared, but mainly respected; and, certainly not hated: that's the route they're aiming for as a group

The Tyrells got away with putting the Baratheons under siege twice with no retribution whatsoever. Even when Stannis takes a great chunk of their bannermen, they still have complete and undisputed control of the Reach other than some dissident houses who aren't even opposing them in battle (like the Florents).

Whereas the Tyrells are physically attractive and pleasant, the Florents are butterfaces with a sense of entitlement and no social skills

Florents not only they are unsociable, they are smug, stupid and pretty ugly.

Not only are they unpleasant people as a whole, they are generally fairly unpleasant-looking, too (all sneers and ears). Subverted by the half-Florents Shireen Baratheon (she is innocence incarnate) and Edric Storm (an energetic little charmer). Even though they still have those ears, neither wear sneers.

Florents consider themselves to have a better claim to Highgarden than the Tyrells as they descend from House Gardener through the male line and not the female line like the Tyrells

They are said to be descended from Florys the Fox, a daughter of Garth Greenhand who had three husbands who did not known of each other and fathered the founders of Houses Florent, Ball, and Peake

they may have a fox as their sigil, but their arrogance and stupidity screw over nearly every single "cunning" plan they make

When Renly and Stannis each declare themselves king, Alester declares for Renly, despite Stannis being the rightful king and Selyse being his wife. This can be chalked up to Alester being loyal to his liege lord, Mace Tyrell, who declared the Reach for Renly, though it is pointed out that Brightwater Keep is too close to Highgarden for the Florents to risk Tyrell displeasure. However when Renly dies Alester breaks his oath to Mace and heads over to Stannis' camp, because if Stannis wins it will mean House Florent gets more political power in the Reach (though Mace hadn't declared for Joffrey yet). Then when Stannis' campaign is failing Alester goes behind his back and selfishly offers Shireen to the crown (as in the Lannisters who are known for their cruelty and child abuse), in exchange for a pardon and Brightwater Keep back in Florent hands. Loyalty is not this man's strongest quality.

Despite his flaws, he is the only Florent encountered so far who is not a R'hllor fanatic or a complete Jerkass. He even treats Davos courteously

Just like Harlen Tyrell surrendered the Reach to Aegon The Conqueror by bending the knee, Mace Tyrell surrendered and bent the knee to Robert Baratheon when the fighting was all but lost. In both occasions, it gave them huge advantage leaps forward, consolidating their power. Dudes are very good at surrendering.

And just like ambitious house from the Reach who married their gorgeous daughter to the King and the patriarch is the second most powerful man on the country? Hello again, Hightowers! Other than that, the Tyrells don't seem to be failing in the War of Five Kings where the Hightowers did during the Dance of the Dragons, which is the fact that they have never overplayed their hand (except with Renly, and they corrected that remarkably fast).

Where the Freys have tried their social climbing the direct and dirty way when not marrying into every power in sight, the Tyrells have gone about it rather differently (if, also including marriage). Both have large families (granted, the Tyrells don't outnumber the Freys: but, they're still not a tiny family), both have Thicker Than Water tendencies. But, only one is succeeding at this whole PR thing and has plans in place for when various linchpins may no longer be in the world.

They seem to have a flexible code of honor and a love of family that's seeing them stick together and manage to stay together while forging ahead in the Decadent Court atmosphere. "Strong" is in their motto. "Stark" also means strong. The Starks remain strong through endurance and will power, the Tyrells through clever alliances. Both are loved by their smallfolk but while the Starks are honorable to a fault, the Tyrells have no true loyalties but to themselves. Both have ancestors who surrendered without a fight to Aegon the Conqueror

Like the Lannisters both are ancient and powerful houses that have been working to exert their influence over the Iron Throne to their own benefit, but whereas the Lannisters are essentially a Big Screwed-Up Family who cooperate through Teeth-Clenched Teamwork at best, the Tyrells work together out of genuine love and affection for one another, treating one another as actual family rather than rivals for power.

Some think they gave their cousins the Gardeners the idea to go fight the dragons

Did it occur to anyone that the Khal is the threat and just have him killed and when the new khal kills Dany and her child well they didn't create the Dothraki culture they can't put that on them or maybe the assassin would fail and if they don't wait until the have proof the Dothraki at least plan to invade they will not have justice on their side and the Dothraki may get over their fear of sea water for revenge

Cersei can scheme and treacher and backstab with all but the very best of them she knows how to GET power but not keep it she has no idea what to do to secure her own future or the actual job of ruling, keeping the masses or bare majority fed and entertained, she has no patience for the balancing the budget stuff and etcetera

Robert didn't thank or reward or even recognize Stannis duty and going above and beyond and his great accomplishments as well and he gave credit to others for Stannis' successes, he blamed the mistakes of others on Stannis but he gave him Dragonstone which is traditional seat of heir and technically made Stannis the third most powerful man in Westeros, to hold those parts of the Crownlands so loyal to the Targaryeans though he probably never said so to Stannis and Stannis probably didn't understand that Robert needed someone as Draconian as Stannis to keep the Targaryean loyalists in line

Baelish doesn't need to embezzle, he's a very successful pimp, not to say he doesn't manipulate the finances of the realm for his own benefit he does but through much more subtle, complicated, and far reaching parts of his schemes
Baelish is trying to create a meritocracy ninety nine percent of Westeros live in squalor

Valyrian steel blades were scarce and costly, yet thousands remained in the world, perhaps two hundred in the Seven Kingdoms alone
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