Reviews for Diamond in the Rough
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 4 . 4/6
Just saying, Americans speak English (not sure if that was comic relief but it didn't work out well if so).
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 1 . 4/6
I'm hoping he can go along the same lines as Toph from Avatar the Last Airbender where she was able to discover how to bend metal due to its connection with earth. Looking forward to the story!
mnbjkbm chapter 3 . 3/31
is he just going to have earth manipulation or more
Guest chapter 45 . 2/17
Great story hope you keep up writing though
PokBloxStories chapter 23 . 7/30/2019
I love this story! I like where Mason's charvater is going! Granted, Im only at Chapter 23 right now, but who cares! I just have one question for clarification. Does Mason's quirk mainly allow the simple ability of making any mineral such as sand, dirt and rock telikinetically float or does he have full control over Stone and such, like an Earthbender from Avatar. Or even both?
seanmcsherry123 chapter 45 . 7/19/2019
Awww Man and this Story was getting Good but ok I Understand
Mister Four chapter 45 . 6/29/2019
Aye I totally understand. If you don't feel like it don't force yourself to do it. It is a shame though since I was enjoying this story. Hope you find enjoyment in your next works man. :D
Oblivious IJ chapter 45 . 6/27/2019
Yay finally a new... ... *Reads*... *starts trembling*... you...*growls*... you... You!... YOU!...YoU!

...Meh do what think is best, if you don't feel it happening it's cool if you wanna step away. I know I'd never wanna continue writing something if I'm not feeling it... that says alot considering I have no stories...

Hmmm how about a story from the Naruto fandom if you're into it? I'm sure that'd give you some ideas... *whispers*... try your luck at a gamer fic! And ya didn't hear it from me... *normal voice*... ya some ideas!

IJ the oblivious one of the oblivious clan!
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 45 . 6/27/2019
GOODBYE!
Scandalf chapter 4 . 5/5/2019
Why is the protagonist constantly PMSing? I swear, his mood swings are worse than a 6 months pregnant feminist with a short cut blue hair.
Honestly, the way this main character reacts to things is a bit too much for me. In just 4 chapters I actually cringed hard for the exact same reason at least 5 times. He's so unstable, it makes Bakugou look completely normal because at least he doesn't go from all happy to all murderous in 0.3 seconds...
Guest chapter 25 . 4/27/2019
P
guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2019
Are you going to update soon or what?
StraxyX chapter 1 . 1/18/2019
So. Can he like... Make tons of lances around himself and fling em at his opponents? Can he cover his body in earth armor(It would be heavy but very hard to pierce)
Naruffoku chapter 44 . 11/20/2018
Why does he have to tell them anything? He’s not obligated to tell his classmates. Although, since Ashido is like his best friend, maybe he would feel guilty for ‘deceiving’ her. But either way, he owes nothing to the rest of his classmates and if they find out they find out
Naruffoku chapter 38 . 11/19/2018
Why do you always pit the OCs against each other, they literally do not need to always fight each other but you do it anyway. I can understand Mason vs his dad because it focuses on making him use his quirk but Hana doesn’t need to be there
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