Reviews for Let Me Out
meladi1 chapter 12 . 9/2/2018
Even tho I didn't understand every curse word, not exactly what we learn in school, I can only say; lady, wash your mouth
meladi1 chapter 9 . 9/2/2018
I love this story. Just the right amount of creepy. And it helps I know enough German to know what that thing is sobbing about
maili-chan chapter 15 . 2/8/2018
Woah I really thought that Prompto would not make it at some point, I shouldn't have doubted Luna's skills after all :3 it's the first horror fic I read so far, and I must admit that it got me pretty nervous when Noctis woke up alone and Prompto acted all crazy on the wall. The most freaky moment was without doubt when Prompto said that there was not only 1 spirit inhabiting his body... god that gave me chills XD Once again, your description of how each character feels is really fluid and realistic, it's as if you bring them to life in your stories.
Thank you for sharing this great story! I guess i sound like a broken record since i say that on pretty much all the stories I read from you, but I really do think they are great and i really do enjoy reading themI'm looking forward to see what else you've cooked up next for the boys!
maili-chan chapter 1 . 2/8/2018
Wow I was really worried Prompto would not make it, but I guess I shouldn't have dounted Luna's skills :3 It's my first time reading an horror fic, and I must admit that I was pretty nervous for Noctis when he woke and Prompto was acting all crazy on the wall. The scariest part (and the best plot twist) really was when you left us wih Prompto saying that there wasn't only 1 spirit inhabiting his body. I was left flabbergasted by that chapter ending, it gave me the chills.
Thank you a lot for sharing this story with us! Another great one amongst you many great fic :D
NicoleBL chapter 15 . 7/26/2017
My heart is swelling with many emotions, one of them is sadness upon finishing this fic. It was just amazing, my gods, I didn't think reading a 'horror story' will actually install fear in you the same way horror games and movies do. I remember those scene that clung to my head, one being when Prompto entered the bathroom and stood in front the mirror, hesitating before slowly looking at, my heart had actually been fluttering along with Promoto's and breath hitching in anticipation, it felt so freaking amazing. And then when he went to take that picture of himself, my goodness wish I was a good artist, I would have definitely drawn that scary picture that I've imagined as you described, I can't help but think if it as eerily beautiful. (A good selfi haha)
Prompto is really pure hearted, it's sad that beautiful heart is such a vulnerability :( Man, even after how he had been hurt, he couldn't even hold anything against them! Unlike the others who couldn't even imagine what kind of hell the poor guy had gone through.
Ah and it was nice adding Luna, first time I read about her actually meeting the guys, it's nice seeing it happening.
Also, loved how Ignis had burned the painting :) That was the best part haha.
An absolute masterpiece, very well done! I couldn't say enough to express how much i loved it.
NicoleBL chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
Oh man, I'm so excited after reading this small teaser! I absolutely love horror, it's not so common to read about this genre here, and this being about Prompto, my fave character, wow.
Before I start though, wanted to comment on that last author note. It's weird how it's always those who do the best are the ones doubting themselves, I don't know what's going in ur life, but at least I can tell you this, regarding writing stories and fanfiction, you the furthest from worthless. And you say you aren't giving it your best? Really? I'm honestly amazed and surprised, I'd think one would give a great effort to produce those amazing pieces I've read. Guess it's pure talent you have.
I hope you stop thinking so lowly of yourself, if writing is what makes you feel good then keep doing it, a lot of people take it so seriously and I do too, honestly didn't know how to live without this site.
secretofflameviii8 chapter 2 . 7/8/2017
OMG "Gladdy Daddy" Cracked me up. Totally funny. Gladio's reaction was funny too.
Great start. I liked how you added Prompto having sea sickness. I also like how "fatherly" Gladio was being. _ too cute.
websky chapter 15 . 7/6/2017
A-MAZING STORY! Top notch author quality! BRAVO! I applaud you!

Thanks for writing it, i really enjoyed this one (though lets be real I enjoy all your stories XD)
THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A GREAT STORY!

AND if you're sad it's over! JUST WRITE ANOTHER GREAT ONE ;)
Weaselandcherry chapter 15 . 7/6/2017
pfft, the first thing he asked was "how's my hair?" I died, haha, he's so cute. Of course, Luna wouldn't care about things like that, but at least he knows now~
And I can't see Nocits talking dirty on the phone, hahahah, Gladio is ridiculous, but it is weird how he always steps outside to talk to her.
Oh no... worse things are yet to come? I shouldn't be surprised, I really shouldn't. I'm holding onto my metaphorical seatbelt.
Nice job! Keep up the fabulous work and happy writing!
~WAC
twaxer chapter 15 . 7/5/2017
Ahhhh this whole story was super good! Thanks so much for sharing your awesomeness, once again! Uh oh... down the hill we go... down down down... (I am SO down for downhill let's DO this!)
Bagpipes5K2 chapter 15 . 7/5/2017
Good ending! Prom finally got his chance to see Luna :) I completely agree with her that Prompto has such a caring soul; he often shows it in little ways in the game. (What's the next story going to be about? :) )
websky chapter 14 . 7/2/2017
LET THE PAINTING BURN...psh what?! Haha Great chapter! This story has been tremendous so far :D
Weaselandcherry chapter 14 . 7/2/2017
Hahah, oh my gosh, Ignis kills me when he's being bad. I love it. And Noctis was so cute- not leaving Prompto's side and taking care of him- a real friendship that brings tears to my eyes~
Now I really want to know how the two died... I'd also like to add that Miss Lunafreya deserves a gold metal. I'm sure Prompto will feel quite embarrassed later on once it finally dawns on him that his first "offical" meet with Luna was during a situation like that, haha. I just feel as if he'd be mortified.
Great job on these last two chapter! Happy writing!
~WAC
MysteriousBean chapter 14 . 7/2/2017
Oh my gosh poor Prom. I really hope this is the end of his suffering, but I can't help but think Iggy and Gladio are going to return to the room and something horrible is going to be there. I hope I'm not right.
twaxer chapter 14 . 7/2/2017
Poor Prompto is totally drained :( Noctis is such an adorable mother hen lol AND WOAH MAMA; IGGY A PYROMANIAC NOW?! I bet Gladio was wondering if IGNIS was the one possessed this time XD AND WHAT ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT?! Well it was a fun ride, and I'm glad I didn't chicken out XD
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