Oof. That's a cliffie. What? What did she do? How unhinged did Hermione get? And how did Elowen respond?

Elowen is awesome, btw.

Different ending for the Ministry fight? Or just the same one from a different perspective? It's been so long since I read that book.

I’ll admit, I’m kind of confused, and I hope you can clear that up in the next chapter or so, but why did she become friends with Harry because of Hermione? The story felt somewhat disjointed at the end, but other than that the chapter was really good.

Sorry. I plowed through this entire chapter and couldn't make heads or tails of it. I guess I'll just have to chalk it up to OC syndrome and move on.

Interesting premise. I like what you've posted so far. Keep up the plausible possibilities. Thanks for writing.

Hmm. Veritaserum interrogator Hermione. Sounds about right. She has a vicious streak, that one.

Elowen is great and could be a good ally to Harry, but his friends interaction with them is horrible (they are so mean and they are supposed to be "good").
If you continue this story, I will be reading it. I am intrigued !

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I had hoped that Hermione, at least, could overcome her distrust.

The story is interesting and fairly well written. My main problem with it is that the chapters are too short. Most of them could be combined with another very easily and it would make the story much more cohesive in my opinion. It also just about was eliminated automatically at the archive. I normally refuse to open a story that has fewer than 1,000 words per chapter. I have a vision problem that requires me to use a text to speech program. Changing chapters can be tedious with this program. It reads well and accurately, however, making chapter changes becomes problematic and time consuming to be accurate.

I really love this story! Have been waiting on an update.

Like it :)