just reread this for the fourth time, please pick this back up, you've brought some interesting mechanics and ideas to this series, and it's been very well done.

Please update.

Decided to reread this. Even though I don't know anything about this franchise, it still makes for some great reading.

Bit of an interesting story, but sort of boring/slow, to be honest. I think it's because he's so passive in his relationships with others. He doesn't really want to be with Rongrong because of all of that age shit—he's not committing. And he's not actively trying to get close or properly interact with other characters. Like he's a part of the group and the dynamic and all, but he just feels so shallow.

A well written story though. Thanks for posting.

I think you should make our mc more powerful that Tang San because I have read the original story and manga and he seemed a bit too arrogant for his own good. And anyway,our MC should be the most powerful one of them all so he can go against the Spirit Hall and later become a god.

Ya I really dislike he's whole age crap it's annoying funny how San has no problem with it but mc is being all oh I'm no pedo blah blah worst is I can see a stupid plot where someone else gets engaged to her and he fights for her mc is cool but your making it annoying

The whole shit about age is getting annoying who gives a fuck you are 11 now stfu about mental age

Poor xiaogang, wait no, poor them tbh. Their love matters is so complicated that I won't touch it even with ten feet pole.

GET OUTTA MY SWAMP!

Man, I'm really enjoying this so far!

i hate black people

Romance forced throughout story, great otherwise, whether it be dialogue or plot.

Wasted five years. Such bullshit.

Never touch a woman's hair...

lightning?