Rave coming to earth as a "not-so-good-guy" is one of my favorite story themes in fanfiction. The story just works so well on multiple levels.

I really enjoyed reading through this one so far. I was a little put off by Kid Flash's attraction to a 10 year old early on, but that is one of the only real issues I had with the story. Most of the scenes were detailed enough to give a clear picture of what was going on. Also, it was so cool watching Raven/Midnight basically be a badass in every fight.

Really hope you update again soon!

Ah, I loved this chapter. So much has happened since the last, and I am positively tickled at the events that transpired. I knew there was I reason I had so much faith in your abilities. Nice to be proven right.I am incredibly pleased with all three story arcs in this chapter: Raven leaving for Azarath and subsequently searching for her father, the Titans dealing with the aftermath of Raven's revelation to the truth, and Slade's musings on regretting his actions regarding Raven and still trying to keep tabs on her. Every single one of these arcs had garnered my intrigue and excitement, which is a great feat.

I thoroughly look forward to what is now in store. In addition, I'll once more express my hope that your classes are going well, and that you continue to manage the hecticness of balancing schoolwork and free time.

Ciao.~

You deserve more review I loved her encounter with the Justice League.

This is a wonderful story I love it I love how you did Raven's past and didn't just skip to her working with Slade I also love the details.

Mmmm, not gonna lie, I've got some mixed feelings on this chapter. Actually, and I know you probably aren't gonna like this, but I wasn't a super huge fan of most of it. I disliked using Star as a placeholder for Raven in the Beast Within episode, and I really am not a fan of the fact that Raven and Slade separated as a team. The interactions and relationship between those two was a big part of why I really liked this story. I'm also a bit disappointed that Wally and Raven seem like they'll still be a couple. I was hoping that with the excuse of Rachel being "dead", that would allow for closure of that particular plot arc so Raven could focus on what's important.

Now, I really don't want you to be disheartened by my criticism. I greatly enjoy your writing style and this story, and will continue to read and review it until the day it ends. This is, after all, only my opinion on the matter. It's quite possible that every other reader will love this chapter. However, I think that I should be able to give you my honest opinion.

Regardless of how the story continues from this point onward, I shall remain your faithful reviewer, and trust that you will do what you know is best for Raven and this story. Thus, until next time, ciao.~

P.S: Good luck with school and classes, I hope all of that goes well!

I’ll gladly stay tuned :) writers like you need more recognition

This story is brilliant! You are a great author.

You deserve so many views! Your story is so well thought out and the use of words is splendid! Can’t wair for an update. :)

Happy belated birthday, mate!

As always, love the update. It was fun to get a bit of canon show mixed into the story, and even better with the twist of adding Midnight in. I will say, I'm looking forward to seeing a bit more or Slade and Raven in action again too. I kinda miss the two of them going on contracts together. It was definitely a delight when Blood showed up alive, and even more so when Raven decapitated him. I wonder if he's going to be like a little weed that keeps coming back, heh. I'm really looking forward to what comes next, but thanks for the update in the meantime!

P.S: The shortened version of my name was cute, I like it!

No problem about the reviews mate, I know how even one review can help an author push forward through writing the next chapter. As far as Ravager goes, I totally get you. Raven kinda did snag her place. Maybe make her some sort of anti-hero like Red Hood, or an anti-villain like Red X? Honestly, you really don't have to include her at all. The story is great, and I'm enjoying every bit of it.

But yea, I'm really excited to see what comes next.

I liked this one a lot, and I'm glad you did decide to tone back the time skip. I think it worked really well, particularly because you went a different route with how the Titans formed, involving Wally.

I am curious, since you mentioned his two sons, will you have Ravage (Rose Wilson) play a role in this story at all, or leave her out? Lately I've been really into exploring her and her character. Not particularly a suggestion or anything, just a curiosity.

I'm excited to see midnight come back. Is it bad that a part of me wants to see her face off against Kid Flash and actually hurt him, showing just how different this version of Raven is from the one we're used to? Probably, heh.

Either way, I look forward to the next update. Also, I hope you're having some very Happy Holidays, whatever it is you celebrate this season.

Mmm, I enjoyed this chapter a lot too. I'll be a bit sad to see the time skip, because I really like what you have going on now. But I get that you want to get the Titans in there. Either way, looking forward to the next update.

Really cool story. I'm enjoying the concept, and it's nice to see this side of Raven explored. I look forward to future updates.

This is a pretty good book, cat wait to see it progress

ooohhh this is so interesting