Please update this! It's so good!

Please continue this

CONTINUE!

This overall is an interesting concept, but I find your portrayal of Jedi Master Plo Koon, mind you a vocal respecter of clones and life in general, exceedingly off setting.

I enjoyed this. I'm glad the Jedi are letting Rex be trained.

Hmm not bad but I do need address few things.

One, Grammar. Not too bad, just gotta make to add in . at end of conversions, with when it's yelling you gotta use ! or if you really want make it a very loud yell, capitalism all the letters with adding the !. Also make sure also add capitals like for an example Skywalker smirks. "I can handle it Master."

Now few things felt off, Plo Koon. That's something I seen him saying, him saying "We need to find how many there are and deal with them." That's not something I see Plo saying. Plo is one of the most vocal Jedi about the rights of Clone Troopers, he always placed their lives before the mission, he was very good General leader having been a veteran and played huge role in the Stark Hyperspace war years before the Clone Wars, hence why the Empire was force lie about the way Plo died in Order 66, he was a beloved Jedi by the Republic and to the Clones who served with him. Overall that was just out of character for him to say, there may be few members on the Council who would say it but not Koon.

Now the one thing needs be clear, see Jedi Masters or Knights in Anakin's case, are not allow have two Padawans, they can only have one.

Anyway I only figure those needed be said, am not saying you're story isn't good, it's caught my eye alright and I do find results of Rex being a force wielder interesting, I wish you luck on this story and your others.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

That was good and interesting change with Rex being force sensitive. The most funny part of this is when Yoda said he would regret making Anakin teach Rex. It was a good idea for him to come out during the Umbara arc.

Very interesting and good reimagining of episodes.