Huh, well this was an intriguing cliffhanger to leave off on. I believe this ghost is Desiree? I don't think I've ever seen this interpretation of her before-not that she shows up super often in fanfics, poor gal-so this is rather interesting! If you ever decide to update, you can bet I'll be here to read the next chapter as soon as I see the notification! In the meantime, I'm just glad I got to enjoy the story so far.

Cool chapter. But I‘m a bit confused. Danny killed himself? Is he dead? Please update soon.

Good story

How much love Niger till the next chapter

Another delightful chapter with a dream sequence that morphs its way in so that the reader isn't sure when it is moves from reality to a dream.

Since Danny seems to have ambitions of challenging Dash, some of Phantom's skills might carry over. I suppose that makes sense since it is actually another part of his mind but its still kind of cool.

As always I like the easy flow and natural feel of your conversations and of course a penchant for putting poor Danny in embarrassing situations.

I like that you kept the 'weird dreams' theme from Disconnected

I didn't understand most of what happened in this chapter. Like as soon as the lights went out in the gym you lost me. Was it all a dream? I get that he made a deal with a ghost but everything else is confusing.

I definitely remember someone mentioning Desiree on the last chapter!

There's the discourse from the original that had me all creeped out. :0 Your descriptions are too eerie. Excellent.

And as a Danny/Paulina shipper, I hope he does manage to impress her! :D

And I love your dialogue/playful banter, too. :3 Danny and Tucker are especially so cute together, dawwwww~

Is it her?

I think guessing Desiree form a random bottle topple would be quite a reach
Dream sequence is pretty interesting, btw

I would've let you win that deal since it was January nineteenth for me, but now I think you pretty much have to post it. XD

Anyway, that was a very Fentonesque thing for Maddie to make Danny do, and I couldn't be happier. If I were an artist, I'd draw Danny in that uniform because that just sounds so precious. :3

I vote imekitty because I really want to read that mer!Danny story ;) You may not think it’s good, and for all I know it might not be, but I DO know that there is a deplorable amount of mer!Danny swimming around the internet. Also, I enjoyed the chapter. A bit filler-ish, but it read like you were setting up for something bigger, so that’s good. Until next time,
GG

Her

Hmmmmmmmmm...

Stakes.

slightly evil cackle

MerDanny! Post it! Post it! Post it!

On another note, good segway into Desire showing up.

RFYS!

Pterodactyl