Really well-written. I love all the nuances and subtleties you spread throughout the fic. It's like getting twice as much story with half the words. Well done!

Is it weird that I ship them hard?

I'M DYING. Like, yelling a bit in my empty house because you are TOO GOOD. I feel like I ought to be territorial, but I just really really REALLY want you to write more

Nice work! Definitely one of the better ones.

OH DANG
This is actually really good - I hope you continue, the twisted relationship you've started building is really intriguing

Hmm...I'm not usually a fan of Violaf. But, hey, this one was really well written...and I like it!

Oh Count Olaf! You married her! Ugh! You forced her to marry her and then you bring another woman into your home?! Might as well treat her like a proper wife and not cheat on her! BTW, what happened to Klaus and Sunny?

So good