I thought it was pretty cool! I’m a massage therapist, so when I read that part of things I was rather pleased! You’re a good writer! There are a few times when you mix up certain things like too, to, and two, and there, their, and they’re, but that’s rather common and it doesn’t really detract from the story. There were also a few times when you used one word, and it was clear that you meant something else that was similar in spelling, but, again, it was easy to figure out what you actually meant. I like this story very much! I hope to see more of it soon!

And this chapter was just perfect! It really is the best revenge ever! Take that Potter, you asshole!

Well, I rather like this turn of events, though I wish I’d picked up on it sooner! I’m Aro Ace myself and it took 28 years for me to figure it out. I’d tried dating in the past, because that’s what I thought was expected of me, but I hated every minute of it. So, go Davis!

"Had her former best friend stooped so low that he would have feeling for someone as awful as Simone Serapeum?"

Lily, Lily, Lily... Do I really need to point out the complete hypocrisis of these words...?

Great chapter, btw! Keep it like it :)

GAAAAAAAAAAAA! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! LUV HOW YOU INCORPORATED FAE INTO THIS! DO MORE SOON!

i really appreciate how much detail and research you put into this chapter. it’s wonderful to see an author put their best in the work they create.

Loving the new chapters! Looking forward to more!

By the way, I'm not sure if you get message notifications anymore, but I hope you got my message.

Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!

I want to wait until I fully catch up to posa full review but I did have a couple quick questions before I forget. Firstly, wouldn't Sev and Lilly have turned 17 in Jan of their 6th year? (Since they had to be 11 to start Hogwarts and therefore turned 12 in Jan of their 1st year...) Also, why did Sev practicing Legilimency during the last winter break not get him in trouble for underage magic? Nothing too major, but just somethings that were bugging me a bit. Otherwise I am loving reading your story and can't wait to continue on!

I am so smug right now

Oh man it just got really good

I saw this happening. Very well done.

thank you for continuing this superb story, I was afraid that you had abandoned this fiction thank you for the work you do and for the time you spent for this story which is the best snily of this site from my point of view.
as i suck in english i use google translation to read it and i don't know if you would read my comment or if google translation does a good job of translating french to english, but i will try to put a comment in english more late because I would like to share with you my point of view on your work as well as everything that your story makes me think about and showed me the hypocrisy that I find in the work of JK ROWLING.
Again thank you to you as well as all who put comments because I really like to read everyone's point of view. Unfortunately in France I did not find a site where people understood the character of Severus snape from my point of view, it is either all white or all black with them, love and hatred total and rare are people really see further than the surface

merci de continué cette superbe histoire, j'avais peur que vous aviez abandonnées cette fiction je vous remercie du travail que vous faites et du temps que vous consacré pour cette histoire qui est la meilleur snily de ce site de mon point de vue.
comme je suis nul en anglais j'utilise google traduction pour la lire et je ne sais pas si vous lirais mon commentaire ou si google traduction fait un bon boulot pour traduire le Français en anglais, mais je vais essayé de mettre un commentaire en anglais plus tard car je voudrais vous faire part de mon point de vue sur votre œuvre ainsi que tout ce que votre histoire ma fait réfléchir et à me montré l'hypocrisie que je trouve dans l'ouvrage de JK ROWLING.
Encore merci à vous ainsi que tout ce qui on mis des commentaires car j'aime vraiment lire le point de vue de tout le monde. Malheureusement en France je n'ai pas trouvé de site ou des gens on bien compris le personnage de Severus rogue de mon point de vue, c'est soit tout blanc soit tout noir avec eux, amour ou haine total et rare sont les gens a vraiment voir plus loin que la surface

I’m glad for this update.

This is by far one of the best severs fanfic.