oh the angst... *cries* That was good though. -

that was rather self-derogatory. poor tsuzuki. *sniffle* he needs an ego boost!

SQ

ow. oww oww ow ow ow. that *hurt*. ...stupid muraki.

ack. sorry, i'm supposed to be reviewing, aye? lots of angst and yet it had its uplifting moments as well... i'm looking forward to seeing how (if he manages to) hisoka will deal with what just happened, as well as the case... hisoka's pov was really nice. blah, poor tsuzuki. ;_;

Is it just me or did I make the wrong choice of reading this while listening to the musicbox version of 'Alone'? The song's not depressing but... Kami! This is just the first chapter, right? When are you going to update it, then?

I love the way you wrote in Tsuzuki pov and then Hisoka. That's really make me understand them more. I love the way Tsuzuki described Hisoka's eyes, beautiful but yet so empty. I also love the way Hisoka really wanted to help Tsuzuki and yet pushed him when he wanted to help Hisoka. That little girl would still makes an appearance I'm sure, since her friend's soul is stay around her all this time, right? Please post the next chapter quickly!

beautiful beautiful beautiful. i'm really impressed. :)

Just like a manga chapter. Can't describe it any other way. *a round of applause*

Okay, since I saw a chapter 1 at the beginning of this, I'm ASSUMING you're going on with this as a multi-chapter story.

But anyways, this captured their feelings very well. And lots and lots of angst. _;;

Interesting vignette. lots of anst (yay!)

*cough* Are you guys keeping it a one-shot..you could easily continue with it?