| Reviews for I May Fall |
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Jezzzzz chapter 6 . 6/23 I love the story but I don't understand why Hermione was getting upset that Harry didn't tell her, when Hermione never told her about being a demigod. |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 3 . 3/6 Loki has the right to punish the Ministry for Magic Plus As Hari's father he Helped Build and found Hogwarts and this one of the Owners. Plus I would also have it where he is also a Wizards Council Founder aka Wizengamont Founder Thus with Veto powers. And as the Norse God of Magic having the power to take away their Magic. Plus with one of the the mentions Hermione is a Demi-God at Camp Half-Blood in Long Island. As for the Awakened DNA I bet it was the awakening of the X-Gene. Or the Awakening of The Angelic Gene making Hari a Nephilim and thus Lily also a Nephilim. As for Draco and the Stupid Wizards don't realize is that Hermione is a half-blood daughter of Hecate. This is were I say that The Wizarding World need The Parents of two Witches that are the God and Goddess of Magic to strip many of their Magic. Such As That if Tom Marvolo Riddle and The Death Eaters and many of The Corrupt at The Ministry to lose their magic. As for the bullshit of binding her Powers is a big day no no. I would never allow it no matter what that Old Goat thinks. I would smack that old man down so hard he would never got get and he would never do it ever again. As for the elderly do have respect to a point but not fully or blindly. in real life I have met my share who have done something to lose my respect and trust and thus would never get either back ever again. Just as a lot of the young don't fully have my respect or trust because of their stupidity and lack of proper morals and eithics. |
Kathalla chapter 6 . 9/9/2019 This is a great story so far but I'm saddened that you never got around to finishing it but perhaps in the future, you might. |
ficfan chapter 6 . 4/6/2019 hey I love this so far! I also love you brought Acheron in will There be more? Hope this isn't abandoned! |
LoveAngel5952 chapter 6 . 12/23/2018 Hey how are you doing all these years or month hope your doing well wish you and your family a happy Holidays and Merry Christmas to ya, I just hope to pray for a Christmas miracle for you to come back to Fan-fiction again we miss you so much I know your think of something for your next Chapter I know you can do it I believe it Come back to us soon Merry Christmas to you all |
Bria chapter 6 . 11/3/2018 Can you ntinue this please? It’s really cool |
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 6 . 10/29/2018 :D :D |
The Master of Thanatos chapter 6 . 10/11/2018 theres a day when all hearts will be broken when a shadow will cast out the light and our eyes cry a million tears help wont arrive theres a day when all courage collapses and our friends turn and leave us behind creatures of darkness will triumph the sun won't rise when we've lost all hope and succumb to fear as the skies rain blood and the end draws near i may fall but not like this-it won't be by your hand i may fall not this place, not today i may fall bring it all-it's not enough to take me down i may fall theres a place where we'll stand outnumbered where the wolves and the soul-less will rise in the time of our final moments every dream dies theres a place where our shields will lay shattered and the fear's all that's left in our hearts strength and our courage have run out we fall apart when we lose our faith and forsake our friends when the moon is gone and we reach our end there's a moment that changes a life when we do something that no one else can and the path that we've taken will lead us one final stand there's a moment we make a decision not to cower and crash to the ground the moment we face our worst demons our courage found when we stand with friends and we won't retreat as we stare down death then the taste is sweet i may fall but not like this -it won't be by your hand i may fall not this place, not today i may fall bring it all-it's not enough to take me down i may fall |
Anna Mara chapter 3 . 10/2/2018 Oh my god. You have PJO and Chronicles of Nick and who knows what other crossovers in here. |
Mortal Book Lover chapter 6 . 8/24/2018 Very good work! I really enjoyed reading it! |
TinyFox2 chapter 6 . 8/21/2018 Freaking why did Harry suggest this? Like, she’s not dumb and could probably figure out that Loki would at least see the bedding. Anyway, love this. |
Eternalking500 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 Please update soon, this is a great, unique story with a lot of potential. |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2018 Hello how are you I hope your doing so well and having the best summer fun of your life and I hope and really hope you come back soon and update this story soon again and I believe in you can do it I still love this story |
bonbon2007 chapter 6 . 5/10/2018 he also kinda forgot the stuff hidden in the spot under the bed lol |
goblin81 chapter 6 . 5/6/2018 A lively story with so much potential i hope you come back to it. You have so much you can draw from between Ash and crew, the marvel-ous universe you cast it in, Percy J. and the Potterverse. More please. |