Reviews for I May Fall
Jezzzzz chapter 6 . 6/23
I love the story but I don't understand why Hermione was getting upset that Harry didn't tell her, when Hermione never told her about being a demigod.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 3 . 3/6
Loki has the right to punish the Ministry for Magic Plus As Hari's father he Helped Build and found Hogwarts and this one of the Owners. Plus I would also have it where he is also a Wizards Council Founder aka Wizengamont Founder Thus with Veto powers. And as the Norse God of Magic having the power to take away their Magic.

Plus with one of the the mentions Hermione is a Demi-God at Camp Half-Blood in Long Island.

As for the Awakened DNA I bet it was the awakening of the X-Gene. Or the Awakening of The Angelic Gene making Hari a Nephilim and thus Lily also a Nephilim.

As for Draco and the Stupid Wizards don't realize is that Hermione is a half-blood daughter of Hecate. This is were I say that The Wizarding World need The Parents of two Witches that are the God and Goddess of Magic to strip many of their Magic. Such As That if Tom Marvolo Riddle and The Death Eaters and many of The Corrupt at The Ministry to lose their magic.

As for the bullshit of binding her Powers is a big day no no. I would never allow it no matter what that Old Goat thinks. I would smack that old man down so hard he would never got get and he would never do it ever again. As for the elderly do have respect to a point but not fully or blindly. in real life I have met my share who have done something to lose my respect and trust and thus would never get either back ever again. Just as a lot of the young don't fully have my respect or trust because of their stupidity and lack of proper morals and eithics.
Kathalla chapter 6 . 9/9/2019
This is a great story so far but I'm saddened that you never got around to finishing it but perhaps in the future, you might.
ficfan chapter 6 . 4/6/2019
hey I love this so far!

I also love you brought Acheron in will There be more?

Hope this isn't abandoned!
LoveAngel5952 chapter 6 . 12/23/2018
Hey how are you doing all these years or month hope your doing well wish you and your family a happy Holidays and Merry Christmas to ya, I just hope to pray for a Christmas miracle for you to come back to Fan-fiction again we miss you so much I know your think of something for your next Chapter I know you can do it I believe it Come back to us soon

Merry Christmas to you all
Bria chapter 6 . 11/3/2018
Can you ntinue this please? It’s really cool
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 6 . 10/29/2018
:D

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The Master of Thanatos chapter 6 . 10/11/2018
theres a day when all hearts will be broken
when a shadow will cast out the light
and our eyes cry a million tears
help wont arrive

theres a day when all courage collapses
and our friends turn and leave us behind
creatures of darkness will triumph
the sun won't rise

when we've lost all hope
and succumb to fear
as the skies rain blood
and the end draws near

i may fall
but not like this-it won't be by your hand
i may fall
not this place, not today
i may fall
bring it all-it's not enough to take me down
i may fall

theres a place where we'll stand outnumbered
where the wolves and the soul-less will rise
in the time of our final moments
every dream dies

theres a place where our shields will lay shattered
and the fear's all that's left in our hearts
strength and our courage have run out
we fall apart

when we lose our faith
and forsake our friends
when the moon is gone
and we reach our end

there's a moment that changes a life when
we do something that no one else can
and the path that we've taken will lead us
one final stand

there's a moment we make a decision
not to cower and crash to the ground
the moment we face our worst demons
our courage found

when we stand with friends
and we won't retreat
as we stare down death
then the taste is sweet

i may fall
but not like this -it won't be by your hand
i may fall
not this place, not today
i may fall
bring it all-it's not enough to take me down
i may fall
Anna Mara chapter 3 . 10/2/2018
Oh my god. You have PJO and Chronicles of Nick and who knows what other crossovers in here.
Mortal Book Lover chapter 6 . 8/24/2018
Very good work! I really enjoyed reading it!
TinyFox2 chapter 6 . 8/21/2018
Freaking why did Harry suggest this? Like, she’s not dumb and could probably figure out that Loki would at least see the bedding. Anyway, love this.
Eternalking500 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
Please update soon, this is a great, unique story with a lot of potential.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2018
Hello how are you I hope your doing so well and having the best summer fun of your life and I hope and really hope you come back soon and update this story soon again and I believe in you can do it I still love this story
bonbon2007 chapter 6 . 5/10/2018
he also kinda forgot the stuff hidden in the spot under the bed lol
goblin81 chapter 6 . 5/6/2018
A lively story with so much potential i hope you come back to it. You have so much you can draw from between Ash and crew, the marvel-ous universe you cast it in, Percy J. and the Potterverse. More please.
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