great story, thanks ;) i loved it

great, story, thanks ;)

great, thanks

Beautiful Story...You both have an Amazing writing style! You are wonderful authors.. The way you preserved their personalities to the 'T' while having them in a completely different situation was just great.. Looking forward to reading more of your and FourtrisHEA's works...

For some reason, I thought it was day 3 of the ultimatum and this chapter made me furious.

Good. Enjoyed.

I honestly think it's a good decision for tris to live on her own for a while.

Great story thank you for writing it!

That was a beautiful ending for a terrific story! Thank you so much for sharing it, I liked how you put in so many different emotions.

Thank you for bringing this great story to a happy end.

This was so much fun to read with all the twists and turns for Fourtris. I absolutely love a happy ending and glad they finally got one. I hope to read something else of yours in the near future. Amazingly done!

Amazing! Fantastic ending!

I love this story so so much, I didn't want it to end ever. Please consider doing an epilogue or better yet a sequel. You two are such great writers . I hope you both continue to give us more of your talent. I also loved how consistent you both were with your updates, I'll miss being excited on Sunday nights counting down the hours till I could read your fabulous story. Sharlayne

Thanks for a wonderful ending to such a terrific story. They deserve happiness so I am glad they get it in the end.

Great way to end the story with Natty finally calling Four Dada. That was so sweet. Loved the story, thought it was absolutely fantastic. I think you both did a seamless job of having the chapters flow, I never knew who wrote what chapter or that it was more than one writer. Can’t wait to see new stories from both authors, hopefully soon. So glad I waited to read the story in one go . Happy New Year!