| Reviews for Deceptions & Secrets |
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by divergentlove chapter 22 . 5/23 OMG! I love this story |
DivergentWitch chapter 35 . 7/13/2019 Ha! Knew it.. Been binge-reading your story since yesterday.. You both write beautifully.. Actually from the first time I read about Marcus comforting Natalie and later asking for her hand.. I knew he was somehow involved in the "Bus Accident".Just had this feeling in me...Good to know I picked it right.. He truly is a monster...Too excited to get back to the story ...Am loving it... |
Guest chapter 37 . 1/29/2019 Wow! |
DaisyFosterer chapter 37 . 1/30/2019 This was such an amazing fanfic, I just wish Tris would have called Four, Tobias through this because it made it feel like there was... I don’t know, it just made their connection more more if that makes sense. |
DaisyFosterer chapter 25 . 1/28/2019 Arg Uriah keeps being turned down and I NEED Tobias to know that! |
DaisyFosterer chapter 18 . 1/26/2019 I hate him! |
DaisyFosterer chapter 16 . 1/26/2019 He is cruel now! |
DaisyFosterer chapter 13 . 1/26/2019 Wow. I love this chapter |
DaisyFosterer chapter 10 . 1/25/2019 Arrrggggggggggg! I need something to,work with! |
DaisyFosterer chapter 9 . 1/25/2019 I now HATE Tobias. |
DaisyFosterer chapter 3 . 1/22/2019 Wow. Ummm, plot twist much? (This was written like 8 paragraphs in.) |
trini86 chapter 37 . 10/17/2018 I so loved this! Very well done |
lady05giggles chapter 32 . 10/7/2018 I have a love/ hate relatinship with stories like this. It is well written, and I like the new take you had on the story, but I hate when Four and Tris both lie and then they get angry at each other for lying. So annoying. In real life, just take a minute and think people! |
Guest chapter 37 . 8/29/2018 OMG! what amazing story, what amazig written you are, thank you , thank you so much! Elsy G |
Guest chapter 33 . 7/1/2018 Now that's a mommie dearest lady. |