oof.

Nice... how they switched from murder/possession investigation to wedding bells

Loving the story.
Also you are right keep going how you're going and you might (sorry) make to Anaklusmos14 good luck

Please continue this story!

not bad, not bad at all.

Wow, Poor Annabeth. After all of that she just dies to him.

I love the story, and of coutse I'm sad to see it go, but I love dark stories the most like the one i should probably update lol. Can't wait to see what you'll be bringing next!

all for it
power to you

I dont think I have erer seen anyone finish a rewrite. Guess Ill just have to see what you abandon this for.

Of course. And the rewrite will be all of 6 chapters before it’s forgotten about. Just like everyone else that rewrites a story

lmao *your

I completely understand why you'd want to rewrite the story. I do hope that it generally stays the same story, i mean there can be different event but it would be with the same characters, same end goal, and same feelings they have had in this story.

oh btw, it would be nice to have each chaptered named instead of just 'chapter 1', so you can tease a bit of the chapter, not too much, but it would be great for people who want to reread or for people who come late to the scene and look at the chapters to know a little about the story, like you would do in a real book. look at the index of chapters to see if the story is interesting.

if you ever need an opinion about an idea, or need an idea (be it a weapon, armor, character, quest, plotline,...) you can always contact me via PM i would love to help in any way i can. As you might know i'm full of great ideas. (i can create good backstories for all those things too :D)

Have a good day/night.
-DarkGamer

Alright. Just update when your new story is out.

Lol, or you could name it “Raise or Raze”

Please continue