Um no it doesn't make me want to see where their relationship will go... Honestly it's clear where it's going to go... A turning point in the story will have Esdeath choosing either strength or Naruto... it's self explanatory

Esdeath will be mad alright. That she didn't get to see Naruto's brutality.

Only if naruto wasn’t s pussy I would like it

Dude the story is yours not the people commenting all i want from this story is for it to be completed no one has accomplished that and im hoping you do it you know how to write something that gets people to click on the sharingan topic its a good idea and since how he has the sharingan hasnt been revealed since its not a family thing i was thinking it to be a teigu of sorts the only problem i see is how your gonna limit it or how naruto is gonna get around when they inevitably fight just...please complete your my only hope naruto x esdeath for life peace and have a wonderful life

the summary makes it sound like its just esdeath, until it drops the harem word right after like esdeaths thoughts never existed

You son of bitch

Menma still being in this story in the rewrite is a big effin YIKES from me dude, real shame since this story is pretty interesting with Naruto and Esdeath's relationship but man that sucks.

Exactly, Naruto's father was ruthless and a fighter. That ia the reason why Naruto's personality is such a BIG PLOT HOLE. If he is raised by such a father he should be like him, why is he a pacifist. You can't just put him as a pacifist at random. There has to be some reason as why he is different from his father.

You say you didn't put an Uchiha in this story just an Oc with sharingan. That's just like me saying in my story that i didn't put Naruto in my story just someone who can do rasengans and clones. And most likely people complained about the sharingan not about an uchiha. And i agree with them. I don't see why you even did that. Just ruins the story as the sharingan is too op, just th3 fact that you can't look into your opponents eyes as you fight is OP af. If you wanted an OC with illusions as an ability there were 100 other ways to do that.

pease continue. its really good and i love your storyline. i dont really care about the rewrite because its still pretty good so i dont mind you continuing the original but i guess its all up to you. hopefully youll upload the chapter till syura and naruto dual if you decided to rewrite cause itll be kinda a pain reading the same thing even if there some changes and to wait for new updates giiiiirl thats tiring. anyway love the story so please keep up the amazing work

hello, i just wanna say i really like this story of yours and the cross over of naruto in the akame ga kill is really great different than other stories ive read so far,and iam just saying that to keep it up and pls dont abbandon this story, juat saying this cause alot of great stories just got abbandon which is a shame and heart breaking for the readers... anyway keep up the great work man.. or women... english is my secondary language so ya...

No pansy a** Naruto you Kishimoto idiot.

With what you planned out it's interesting and wow you really planned far ahead, most writers on Naruto Fanfiction don't really plan far ahead that's probably why they abandon their story.

no harem for the rewrite please! I have more than enough to see in a crossover Naruto take the place and the harem of the protagonist! I even start calling Naruto the harem thief, that's how much my disappointment is great.
One pairing is suffisant.

This is a complete paradox and mind fuck with how inconsistent the story is and the author lies about how they how structure the story being a hypocrite. Don't bother reading.