bro, add more chapter at the fic

I hope to see more of this story

Great Job! I have not read a story any where close to this one I kinda wish that there were more like this one. I hope to find more with amount of darkness soon.

Well, I wouldn't call Harry evil.
Okay, mind raping and brainwashing nearly everybody could be considered evil, but he has to trust them somehow, no? And it doesn't really hurt them.
Letting others fuck his slaves is gross, in my opinion, but not really evil either.
The killing, well, they were all guilty! Dudley is evil for raping a 12 year old girl and letting her kill herself. So Harry could be considered a hero!

Could make a good series, but the whole harem of slave thing is a bit too much. Sure, nothing against a few slaves. But everybody? Even Hermione, Fleur and Luna? And then letting Luna do Ron and Neville? Gross. I think those 3 at least are too good to be mere slaves. More like wifes or mistresses. Whatever. As long as they are the top slaves...

Plotwise I would focus a bit more about his 'future plans' he mentioned. And getting the required power. Not too much screentime with his slaves. And not simply casually mentioning something important and world changing like reviving Lunas and his own mother in one sentance, but actually making something of it would be good too. And a bit more details of his past/future kills couldn't hurt either.

Damn... I know this is a one-shot, but PRETTY PLEASE tell me you are planning on at least exploring his abuse of Molly/Ginny and the scene once Hermione and Mrs Granger get over there with him and Petunia... Can't wait to see what else comes out of that twisted mind of yours. (And no, I am definitely not saying that in a bad way.)

Please write the next chapter already. Have Harry Potter become Voldemort's twin and fuck the girls till they are in heaven. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and like it a lot.

Few points
1. Till now it doesn't appear to be"evil" Harry story
2. Death really isn't that bad a punishment viz some of the other things
3. Petunia was a slag before marriage and then became prude after doesn't make sense
4. Any reason you are ready to keep Molly etc alive but killed off Narcissa
Lot of backfilling is also needed in terms of how Harry got this power, how was he able to kill accomplished wizards, why does he need minions in form of Ron n Nevelie.
Overall good start, keep writing.

Pretty damn good. You were right it is dark, even darker than Dark Desires and that fic is pretty dark. I loved the matter of fact way Harry told Petunia he had slaves coming over. Just how many slaves does Harry have? It almost sounds like Harry passes some to Ron and Neville. I know some people don't like that but it is a way for Harry to show his dominance. I would definitely love more ficin this series.

I can understand that. Same with writer's block. I've had times where I stare at a blank page for a couple hours. And I've had times where my pen flies across the paper and by the time I come out of the zone, I've written ten pages and my writing hand is stained all over with ink.

I have often wondered why Harry didn't turn darker with a chunk of Voldemort in his head throughout his entire childhood. He seems weirdly overly powerful in this. But a demon-like Harry is entirely plausible. I guess I want to read more flashbacks about how he got in touch w his demon side.

Mmmmmm... Harry's getting back at the people who hurt him in a rather unique way in this.

What I wouldn't mind seeing is a scene between Harry, Hermione, Petunia and Hermione's mom... her initiation, if you will. Whether Petunia is punished before being privileged enough to watch... or participate... Wouldn't the two magic less women be equals at the bottom in the harem?

Only thing that I didn't like about it is Harry letting others use his slaves, using them as leverage like that, I prefer a greedy Harry in that regard.

Also on a personal level I'm so over the bald vagina fad, to me a ladyscaped or au natural downstairs is more erotic than a blank canvas, but that's just me.

Sorry, but this was horrible for me; then again, I HATED 'Playing for Their Lives' as well, so at least I'm consistent...

For a cruel and smutty story, 2 big thumbs up. Ive always loved sibling incest (hello twins) and parent-offspring incest was always discomforting. But damn, never thought Id be mildly ok with Tuney getting down. I dont ship it, but this was pretty good.