| Reviews for But If You Close Your Eyes |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 6/17/2018 My song of the week is the song Oliver is singing, so I wonder if the one Arthur is singing is as good? |
 Paradoxkay chapter 14 . 6/2/2018 Great story! Also, don't let the AP classes stress you out too much. Take it from a college kid, those classes shouldn't take over your life. They make it way too difficult, and believe it or not college classes feel like a breeze after taking AP in high school. Keep up the good work! Take a good break when you can. |
| mdmpinkie9088 chapter 13 . 2/13/2018 GAH SO GOOD! I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE! SO AWESOEM :D |
| Opalserpent chapter 13 . 2/13/2018 YAAAAAAAY UPDATE~! Ooooh nice cliffhanger there! |
| amayo-demayo chapter 12 . 1/26/2018 Ah I love this so much! Definitely excited for the next chapter! |
| Opalserpent chapter 12 . 1/21/2018 OMG U HAVE A NIGHT FURY!? *sends as many flames a humanely possible |
| MidnightZiege chapter 10 . 10/5/2017 AAHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE IT! This is great! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Winchester-StilinskiKitsune chapter 9 . 9/8/2017 Beautiful! I really liked it. Ahh I relate. Ap classes suck don't they! Mine are fun and deadly! |
| Googlettier chapter 7 . 8/10/2017 Come on!I love your article~They're so good!XXXXXD |
| bunyx chapter 6 . 7/20/2017 I understood! I'm just the kind of person to laugh during arguments, if that makes sense... it doesn't, I know. The plot thickens! I'm excited. Will this story explore the differences of the counterparts and their relationships with others, or is this purely story-driven? It's interesting either way! |
| bunyx chapter 5 . 7/3/2017 *Calls Arthur useless* *Gets called useless back* *Is mortally wounded* LOL! That was so funny. |
| Molf chapter 4 . 6/23/2017 I love your style! the story line is awesome! |
| Ollie chapter 3 . 6/4/2017 I hope you update this sucks a bit so I understand. |
| TabaGlorg chapter 1 . 6/2/2017 AMAZING! The story has a really funny/comedic mood, and I love it if that's what you're going for! Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading it very much. I would say that the song lyrics could have some more explanation, for it confused me as a reader, and took away the mood of the story. However, if the lyrics are going to be explained later, it is a good thing to set the mood of mystery now, even if it confuses the readers. Thanks again for this wonderful literature! Taba G. (-) |
| Misty chapter 2 . 5/17/2017 I really love the concept of this story very much! It's rare to see a 1p/2p verse written like this where there is a body switch, good dialogue, and character portrayal. I really like this and cannot wait till you update again. Only thing I am curious about is this nation verse or human verse? |
