first things first. i love your story so far, and can't wait to read more. second, a bit of advice(if you want it) i think it would be nice if the chapters were longer and/or more detailed. no offence though, i am totally OBSESSED with this so far

omg it is so late but I want to continue to read because the story is sooo good

Just watch the videos and now I am terrified to continue reading. Does the baby get kidnapped? I must continue reading, I must find the answers.

Awwwwwwwww

Goooooooooooooodnessssssssssss better and better

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Oh my... I can’t! The sweetest!

Thank the lord

Soooooo freaking good!

Oh shit

Hey I dont know if you look at these. But is there a direct link to the next story you are doing on this one. Id love to read it. Ive read this one 2 times in the list 4 days. And I am debating on reading again. The whole time ive been thinking that this should become part of the tv show or something. The actors that are in the tv show would be perfect for this story. It is brilliant and amazing!

First Riverdale fic that I've read and I LOVE it!

I really liked the story. You made the story very interesting. I have read fanfic before that started out great but was lost somewhere in the middle. Your story kept me interested and guessing what was going to happen next. You done a really good job. I had to translate some of the words from the Queen's English to American English. But it wasn't hard to do. Thanks for sharing your story and your imagination. Good luck with your writing.

Just realized that I read your fanfic “what you left behind” before this one and just wanted to stop by and say that your fanfics are my favorite ones I’ve read

I’m kind of sad the story is over but you did such a good job with it! You were too obvious with your clues and you kept us guessing and engaged the entire time(: The way you set this up, it sort of reminds me of how the show will wrap up the mystery in the penultimate episode, and introduce new things in the last one while everyone is dealing with the fallout of the previous thing.

The family reunion was extremely heartwarming, especially Jughead and Emi! I agree poor Ethel isn’t exactly a criminal but at least she did the right thing and isn’t letting Jughead suffer for her actions.

Betty’s little introspection while Jughead was sleeping made my heart hurt for her! Yeah every thing is more or less solved, but it can’t be easy how close it came to not turning out alright. Thinking “what if” isn’t always the best thing but what can ya do:/ but if anything, it makes me that much more grateful that he’s back and out of jail and they can put that mess behind them.

I’m really happy they ended up graduating, especially after having to deal with this and with having to take care of Emi. High school is hard enough to get through to begin with and I’m so beyond proud all their hard work and dedication paid off! But I’m glad you mentioned how they were more proud to hold her than their diplomas because everything they do is for that little girl, as it should be(:

It was nice to see a glimpse of their lives after graduating, with Emi getting bugger and them having their respective jobs because while the investigation is over, real life still moves along. I do like how you mentioned that all those events spooked them into seeing that communication is so important and they realized that should be a priority if they’re going to work because thats true of any relationship, not just one’s where the couple is involved in murder investigations and such XD

Is it bad I was anticipating the ending coming? XD not because it was predictable or anything but as soon as I saw where things were leading and then it jumps to “three months and a half months later”, my immediate thought is “oh crap is she pregnant” because i’m that person:)) I’m so SO happy you’re going to continue this through one shots! After all this drama and sadness and trouble, I think their little family deserves some fluff and I love Emi so I’m happy to see you continue things with her(:

Took me FOREVER but I hope you enjoyed the review as much I’ve enjoyed your lovely story!(: