im just confused by the format too much work to read so unfortunately i dont know of the story is good but the summary was interesting.

That was different, and I enjoyed it. The epilogue was great. Thanks for the story.

Great story! just not long enough...

Very interesting beginning! I'm not happy about a one-eyed Harry, but one can't have everything...

Loved it, was a bit annoyed at the beginning of the last chapter but happy by the end lol

When you started that last chapter I was about to be super pissed. I was almost sure you where going to leave it open ended. This was so well done though. loved it!

I'll admit to being a bit co fused but after I reread this chapter it made a bit more sense. Good story and I love that the girls are like reading the book about his life. Lol

I have only read the first chapter and am already in love with the story. I am so elated that you have written this story! Also if you could please please pm me the title of the song and the artist. It sounded so cool.

Draco Malfoy

Thanks.

Hi!
I have to say your story was very nice. :)
Well, truth be told, I nearly left at the first chapter when Harry Potter was a rocker. So OOC. I'm not really keen on OOC.
But your good writing, and his thoughts made me wait a little more: I was curious where you would take that, and who was this new Harry Potter or Ethan James (good name Ethan, by the way).
And thanks to that, I got to read a very original and interesting story. :)

It was very nice to read only Harry's thought (except for one chapter). This way, it was more... intense. I could share Harry's feelings more entirely, and it was nice. Other authors should think about that too.

I liked the way you described relationships between Harry and Dumbledore, the Students, the Weasleys. Especially the first one. It was complex, and so full of truth.
With Snape, I like the friendship you built first. I agree that their personalities, a normal relationship btw them is nearly impossible! (well, at first)

Wandless Magic is awesome! I think, too, Harry would develop that in the future. I'm currently writing a story with that, and it was interesting to see your point of view on the subject. You use wands to filter raw magic, I had never thought about that possibility. That's very smart.
As for me, I use wands in order to concentrate and canalise the magic. So very few can do raw magic without wand because it demands natural instinct of magic. Funny how we can find differents idea, isn't it?

Well, i guess I said the most important. Ah! no::
Thank you very much for those great moments I spend reading your story. It was very enjoyable.

Wishing you to go on like that,

Zafyra

Thank you for that fiction. I really really like it.
I'm sorrow that you had to do that to Kestor, I quite like the character...

Not really happy that the fiction comes to end soon, I would like to read a lot more of it, but, well, all the good things comes to an end .
PS: The link to the lemon doesn't work, did you published it somewhere else?

Well, you really don't need to apologize, your fiction is perfect!

Weird but great ending, story within a story?