Do It

ACK
I don't normally like fanfic so with OCs but I LOVE THIS SO FAR!

please continue my friend!

A powerless Bill alone in a forest with creatures who may or may not want revenge... this won't end well.

i found it a bit odd that Evelyn didn't exactly react to the fact that she's treating a floating triangle that's being grappled around like a balloon.

but other then that, at least we're now going somewhere.

I hope this will be continued. I sense potential happening!

"We thought a walking Dorito would look stupid "

Best line ever!

nice start, i look forward to the next chapter

I love Bill Cipher