Jack is not in they're universe.

Damn, that was hilarious and really fucking hot. Great job man.

am cracking up way too much my sides hurt! fuck!

Lmao, this crackfic is so funny and hot. Please write another chapter with a knocked-up Anna.

I don't know why but g!p Elsa appeals to me. Keep up the good work;)

More chapters. I wanna see what happens.

Fucking awesome. Been looking for a new Elsanna One-shot starring a g!p Anna or Elsa .

And I agree, ignore the hater. This was a beautiful story of the most amazingly best incest couple ever. And I was happy that obnoxious Hans died a humorous death(or expected death). Love to either a continuation of this perfect story.

I like, I like a lot. I can't wait to read more

Ignore the hater, it was crack and it was just the short light hearted fic that it needed it to be.

Fun story. Please write more!

Heh. Nice.

Wait, this crap passed someones editing process? What the actual fuck? Why?! Even if this is crack, it's terribly written crack. The idea of Elsa as a bumbling knight who can't keep a handle on her equipment with a father who is comically inept is appealing if done right, but this isn't.

Got one small giggle out of me at max when the king was having the flashback to his wife's demise, but other than that one small moment this story is pretty terrible.

Thanks so much for writing this for me babe. It was awesome and fun to edit.