I know this story is really old, and you probably don't check it anymore, but if Snape doesn't wife her, I will. Love your character.

I don't know why I am reading this kind of stories. I am still blushing red as a tomato

Snape groping a sleeping girl... how... Japanese teen in a sitcom of him.

Oh god, Sirius is such a creepy stalker here. This is so disturbing.

Great story great ending. Looking forward to seeing more writing from you soon. Moving email addy in next week so we need to speak urgently. Pls get in touch.

Poor sirius, snivelus is an ass. I'm suprised you dudn't write about his moping over lily.

Well, I hope this turns to a Sirius OC story because everyone else is just using her and %$%ing her over!
HE still loves her, the big lug. 3

Boooooooo! I hoped that Malfoy would get her instead, even his choices have been better then Snape's so far. BOOOOOOOOOOOOO, don't let him touch you honey he still shrivels when he thinks of your mudblood status!

So, it has taken me forever to send this, but I purchased your book, and I just finished reading it yesterday! Being a Snape fan myself, I loved that he was the inspiration for Uric. The storyline was very interesting; I loved the twists and turns. Who knew Brian had it in him?! The closer I got to the end, the more I had to read. Dialogue and descriptions were great; I had a vivid picture in my mind of how everything looked. You'll laugh, but when you started describing the woman trying to get her hooks into Uric (the name eludes me), I immediately pictured Mrs. Quickly from Nanny McPhee; have you seen that movie? Anyway, I loved it, and I will happily leave a review on Amazon and share on my FB page, too. I have an Etsy shop, so I know the importance of sharing! :)

I'm a little confused...is this taking place before, during, or after the Harry Potter series? :(
The reason why I'm asking is...well, Snape said something about Voldemort's second rise to power, so I thought it was during the HP series (the 7 books), then he said something about Gregory Moore being the temporary DADA, so I thought it was after the series, now he said something about Sirius Black being the castle's guard dog, and that's making me think it's before he was killed in the series...I don't know...I'm so confused...other than that, the story's good, but I'm just confused as to what time period this is taking place in... T_T

So, I finally got around to reading this (Mom has lymphoma, so I'm behind with EVERYTHING), but I really like it. Being a Snape fan myself, I'm very intrigued with this. I'm one of those old-schoolers, so I'm going to head over to Amazon to get the actual book. Writing something original like that is one of my goals - has been for years. Congrats! And after I read it, I'll happily share on my FB and Twitter page, too!

I just finish your story, it was so good and entertaining story, very good one! congratulation for your first book!

Awesome story, both Cauldrons Aflame and The Potion-Maker's Apprentice. Thanks for writing.

Another Severus Snape Smarty Pants fanfiction.

Came across this story through a favourite list of a reviewer of another story- I am hooked on reading it.