oh this made me so sad. Well done!

This was so interesting and sad. I found it fascinating how you wrote Sirius and Regulus as close when they were children- why did you make that choice? (genuine question). You have a great grasp on Sirius' bored, bright, mostly-ruined half-drunk tone, especially in the prose. I also liked, "Well well, look what the kneazle's dragged in".

OMG, that's painfully beautiful! I love Sirius and Regulus being friends before all they been trough, and that went straight to the heart! Your writing is lovely, too. Congrats!