Ah, no! You have got to finish this.
In this chapter you had July 26th. Don't you mean June 26th?
This story is like an multi layer Groundhog Day with a few other plotlines included. (There's an Star Trek, original, episode that a few elements are in this story.)

Hysterical!

Excellent beginning.

This is great! Super excited to see how this pans out. 3

I'm surprised that you chose Alfred as the one for him to emulate, although if he had to be there for 4 years, who else would have had any permanence? I would think, however, that Alfred would know every scar on everyone's body as he was the one treating them, especially if Bruce knows them, or are you suggesting that Bruce's memory of scars he might not have been present for would be greater than Alfred's? (I'm thinking that each of the boys have taken the opportunity to patrol on his own whenever Bruce has been out of town) If anyone would know everyone's history, besides Bruce, it would have been Alfred.

Also, I would have thought a pecking order might have made cooperation easier right from the start among the boys. Having them all the same age should have made them battle it out (verbally if not physically) for who's on top exactly because they are all equal. Admittedly, I don't know "boys" as well as girls, but what I've observed would support this. I'm also thinking about the book, Lord of the Flies. May I assume you have read this? Likely you know more than I do about it, but doesn't age factor into the hierarchy? At the same age, even you did have them competing every chance they got . . .

I still don't like Damian, but he's tolerable when you write him - only slightly, though.

I'm enjoying the story still. Only complaint is that I have to wait months to read the next chapter. It will be interesting if anyone retains their memories of this event. I can't imagine this being possible as Damian will be younger when returned to the present, and why did none of the others remember if they are the same age or older when they return. Perhaps only Bruce will?

Well I didn’t see the twist coming so bravo on that. It’s just such a shame that everything will be reset...
Everything Damian has learnt and everything Fugit has learnt, even their friendship will go. Kind of sad when you think about it but it’s for the best. I discovered a few mistakes which I’ll send you later, Spelling and grammar errors for you to fix.
Otherwise I’m impressed, it was really good. I didn’t think that the twist would work at first because I didn’t understand it but now that I do I’m genuinely impressed and am waiting with anticipation for the last instalment.

Amazing chapter, I did not see that plot twist coming.

I just... don't see 4 teenage boys sitting around ass-naked while comparing scars. I mean, have you MET teenage boys? Even four fully-comfortable-in-their-own-skins teenage boys don't want to see another guy's junk if they can help it.

yay an update. and wow batman rocks in infiltration.

and popcorn on the bed. glad alfred didnt kill the kid coz bedsheets are hard to wash?

Great chapter, I'm so curious as how those the clock king knows batman' s identity and if he is really out to help

Oh wow, getting interesting here.
Question is, will he know who Bruce is when everything goes back to normal? I doubt it actually.
Those poor boys...they were scared and just needed to be close to him. Despite his slow change in character, he can be such a grump. He’s definitely still Bruce Wayne.
I always knew Alfred was a mastermind though.
Well done Jack, very intriguing. Look forward to the next chapter.

I think my favorite part in this is when Bruce remembered the time Alfred slept with him in his bed - 7 yrs old and afraid of monsters under his bed . . . :D

And I love Dick's jokes. ;D

This chapter was great

awesome. i adore the way dami picked a fight with tim.

i also like how devilish jason thinks when he wants to smoke

very please how the bats and the birds synch-think.

and jason was right about not living together if the plan doesnt work.

FF has been down for me all day. I got here only by clicking the link in my email notification. I was wondering how you'd fix this problem. I'm wondering how much of this is fiction from your brain and how much came from some physics scientist's doctorate essay? I am good only with abstract ideas, not the mathematics behind them. I can spell algorithm, though. ;D

I love seeing this from all the different viewpoints. Kind of sad for Alfred having to ride back solo, although I understand the need to stick close to "dad" after a scare like that.