please continue

Hi will you please update

The most... unofficially... terrible... piece... of... Star Wars... fan-fiction... ever...

are you going to do more of this

can not say that she is good.
everything is so rushed the first chapter is a single skip.

sorry my opinion, you should write the whole story again.

Sounds interesting and I like his use of tutaminis

...feels rushed at times also at points this gave off a partial crackish feel {Naruto killing the dragons in the dragon breeding ground for one as those things are HUGE} / I like your idea but the delivery not so much

I won't lie. This chapter looks a little rushed.

interesting.
so look Force sent naruto to prevent the birth of darth vader and the empire.
and it begin by naruto buy Shmi freedom and lead darth maul in the good side of the Force and take him as one of his apprentice (since he is not part of the council, nothing prevent him to take more than one apprentice).
and look naruto action probably prevented palpatine obtain senator seat.

Interesting start can't wait for more.