| Reviews for Unwanted Secrets |
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  Turonom chapter 1 . 12/1/2018 Vhuc5ttuuyyyuut ut utcvjgvhj kl ,IninjbubyvEDFCFGCHGCJafjacfrostSXXCffgh,6554tfx $$/#''":;!*********%!?$ Mérida? $ -Mérida?$ merdanhbnfhfvghvvhvgvghvvhvhvhvhfgg |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/11/2018 This is not a flame I swear! I just wanted to constructivly note that Jack's symptoms, to me, more resemble those of Psychotic Depressive Disorder than of Schizophrenia. Again, not flaming! Just something to think about. |
 YandereNeko Haven chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 This was amazing. It's really intense, depressing, sweet, and hilarious... I can't stop laughing at chapter 20 'Jackarse' |
| someonethe3rd chapter 20 . 1/5/2018 ooooh really awesome finish to a spectacular story! thanks for sharing your skill in writing |
| Musiciscomfort chapter 20 . 12/23/2017 Hey! I know that song! I love 'Dancing Bears' and that movie so much! |
| Loveanimelove chapter 20 . 12/23/2017 Love it! |
| Sofie Rose chapter 20 . 12/22/2017 Oh! And merry Christmas! :D :D |
| Sofie Rose chapter 20 . 12/22/2017 Amazing! Absolutely amazing! I’ll be waiting for the sequel! Can’t wait! |
| Picasso Penguin chapter 20 . 12/22/2017 Yikes! What an ending! Can't wait for the sequel! Merry Christmas! |
| Bluepaw265 chapter 19 . 12/21/2017 WOO! This is too good to stop! I can't wait until the last chapter comes out! You've been doing great, so I'm sure this sequel will be even better! See you next chapter! ~ BP2 |
| BugZ1nTh3FreeZ3r chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 OooooooO |
| Yellowmiki98 chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 Omg don't tell me this is the end |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/20/2017 The book so far is AWESOME! Great plot! A few spelling/word mistakes, but not major. Again, I really like the storyline; my type of books are action/fantasy/suspense, and u put that all into one! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 Good ending! Looking forward to more! So, when this is finished (if this wasn't the final chapter) are you gonna make a sequal? |
| Musiciscomfort chapter 18 . 12/20/2017 I read that and thought, 'that's how everyone fights fear, isn't it?' and, I think, it is. Everyone fights there own inner battles, and to some, its as painful as what Jack just experienced. You wrote it very well, I'm impressed. Keep writing! |
