A great take on the never dying plotline. It all seems to work very well. I hope you are still planning to finish it, its a great start and my interest is really piqued. Thanks

Hi! Great job. Continue, please.

Wow

This is a really good start to a story. I was actually just thinking about what if Elsa was ageless and what that would do to her, then I found this. I assume the hounds are some kind of organized crime/human trafficking organization. I would think that after living for so long Elsa wouldn’t need someone to do all that for her, but maybe it’s just easier. She’d have to make a new identity every 20 years maximum to stay under the radar. Which would be an interesting plot point if she got on someone’s radar, what with all the modern day technology, facial recognition and such. I’m really interested to find out what Elsa thought of World War 1 and 2.

This is super good. That's the good side.

The bad side is that I recall reading only Chapter 1 the first time I found this. Which must have been at least a year ago. But wtf, I'm willing to wait. I'm sure you have a great reason. Like writer's block, or college, or you just don't feel like it.

I need more of this. It's so good and so intriguing. There's there there in this story

waaaaaahhh
R.I.P. it was good while it lasted!
srs though I’ve never read a fic like this but that’s probably just because I’ve not read a lot of FF. what I mean to say is I liked it and it’s unique to me.
Still think elsa is projecting though ️

Just found this fic. Its so good. I like the concept of Elsa being immortal but in the same time really sad for her. Maybe her immortality will be broke somehow with Annabeth? Cant wait for the new chapter!

Amazing update. So excited to see a continuation after so long. This fic is pulling at my heartstrings so hard.

I'm super passionate about the concept of this fanfic! And I like how Elsa is almost a sentimental masochist. please keep up the good work.

Very interesting story ! I love the way you portrayed Elsa's grief and the way to cope with the life without Anna.
I'm really looking forward to read the next chapter ;)

:)

HI!

i love! this fic,
however... there is a catch, Elsa has almost 200 years now, even with a girl called "annabelle" she shoud be able to cope better, ¿hasnt she learned anything in all this time? Her behavios is that of a teenager.

Waiting for next chapter! :)

I remember reader this a while back! Great update! Want to read more! And the hounds? Who they?!

I need more! I'm really looking forward to this story!