Really cool so far

Very good story.

I do not understand the story how could Voldemort and Harry get along at all they are arch enemy one Embraces his good side the other Embraces evil and its deepest form I do not understand how you can consider these two even capable of coexisting in the prophecy specifically state that neither can live while the other survives so you would have to change the prophecy in order to even make this remotely possible and tell me it's still one murdered your family when you are an infant could you stand to be around them I couldn't I'd be trying to kill the S.O.B.

This story was amazing and had a great ending

C'était beau à lire merci

Just a quick note: Harry asks Tom to kill him tonight, then sends Hedwig away and tells her to find him in a week. Might want to fix?

Love it!

Now that's a perfect ending to two souls who have suffered as those two have... love your story...

That was... Fast paced but ... AWESOME!

Would you consider writing an “Epilogue”
(better than JKR’s Epilogue anyway...!)

There is a problematic scenario to the end of this story: Immortal Magical parents and mortal Magical children.

• No parent wants to outlive their child — it is a recipe for heartbreak.

• The ruling SLYTHERIN Family could not all become immortal — if it were even possible — because that would just re-establish a controversial multi-tier Magical Society. Instead of PUREBLOODs being given preferential treatment, a new family of immortals would reign, inevitably causing resentment, fear, and probable society-wide rebellion.

• A “Royal” son who can never succeed their ruling Father is a target for intrigue, manipulation and heartbreak.

• MAGIC breaks many of the accepted Natural Laws. Muggles, by definition, would be fascinated by, envious of, and terrified upon the discovery of a hidden society of Magicals, let alone immortal Magicals, especially led a scary Dark Lord who has megalomaniacal tendencies.

• MUGGLE SOCIETY IS DYNAMIC and responds to environmental, physical, scientific, economic, political, social, theological, and theoretical challenges. The non-Magical race despite its petty emotional flaws and entropic disparity, has flourished on Earth because they are compelled to survive. Muggles use their collective, dynamic intelligence to overcome obstacles. Imagine a secenario like the world of mutants in X-men: rampant fearmongering, unethical experiments, kidnappings, vivisections, executions, chemical mind control, and calls for extermination.

• If we examine literature, IMMORTALITY appears to cause intellectual stagnation, societal ennui, lack of purpose, the magnification of petty rivalries, degenerate behaviors, and oftentimes authoritarian rule to contain the entropic dissonance:

POWER CORRUPTS.
ABSOLUTE POWER CORRUPTS ABSOLUTELY.

Consider literature featuring immortal G/gods be they Roman, Greek, Norse, Egyptian, African, Middle Eastern, Chinese, Incan, Mayan, etc. the powerful beings are rarely benign. Old Testament stories, the Talmud and Koran, most Fables, Myths, religious teachings, Epic Novels, Poetry, Songs,... are the product of fantasy and imagination. However, the ones that endure to become woven in the fabric of our social mores are ones that resonate in the “Human Condition”: individual fallibility, adversity, and change.

MY POINT? Your two protagonists, Tom Slytherin & his soul mate Harry Potter Slytherin, as immortal, powerful Magicals ruling either part or all the beings on Earth will not end well.

I usually like your stories, but if I'm honest I found this one to be quite horrible. The writing was great, but the events...not so much. And I'm a sucker for Severus so I wish he had stayed alive. I find him as much of a victim as Harry. But yeah, anyway just giving my honest thoughts.

Even better than the first time that I read it. These two make an amazing couple and no matter how many stories that I read about them I still want to read more.

You could have just did a spell to make his sperm none fertile instead of cutting off his penis by the gods that would have been much better...

Amazing story!

But I will point out something
These ‘’ are used for mentally talking, not talking for the characters
These “” are used for talking, not mentally talking for the characters

Fix it

It comes across as awkward, to call the LeStrange brothers "boys" and to have them giggle constantly. They are -not- boys like the Weasley twins, after, but at least Snape's age. Do the math. Snape was born 1960. Narcisaa and Lucius are reported to be older yet, and Bella is Cissa's older sister. That would likely put the twins between late 30s and sky's the limit!