I absolutely loved this story! The only complaint I have is that it's so short! I really enjoyed your Hiccstrd and the plot and everything. I'm really glad that I found this story:)

One of the reason that I dislike most "rape/attempted rape" fanfictions is the unrealistic ending that many of them have. In fairness, you have attempted to convey the reality of the "aftermath" in this chapter better than many fanfiction authors do, but the truth is, for far too many women in the real world, a "normal" let alone "healthy" sex life after such a violation is never a reality and the nightmares may lesson but they rarely leave all together adversely affecting not only their lives but the lives of those they love and those that love them. Actions, by their nature, must and do have consequences. That goes for plot choices as well. Having chosen to put Astrid through this, I question that the ending would be as "happy" as you portray it here.

As fulfilling as it was that Randolph finally got his "just desserts," I think it would even more satisfying if it had been Astrid who delivered the final blow.

While I really enjoy how well you right, I, personally, could do with out all the sex abuse in this story . . .

Really good chapter. I often wonder why the writers of RTTE and Dragon Riders of Berk didn't do more with Astrid and Ruffnut's relationship. They seem to be the only girls their age around Berk so it would be likely if not inevitable that she should bond on some level if for no other reason than to survive the antics of Tuffnot and Snotlout.

What IS it with the fascination with rape and attempted rape among fanfictions authors?

I really loved your story
I wish there was a sequel or more but if not that’s fine and I respect that
I wish you would write more Hiccstrid
All the best

Please write more Rtte Hiccstrid
So sick of modern au and incest

I’d love to see a rtte smut fic, maybe if someone who reads reviews can do that

I really loved your story
I wish there was a sequel or more but if not that’s fine and I respect that
I wish you would write more Hiccstrid
All the best

can't wait to see hiccup angry

excellent story!

Thanks this was a nice story, I like it even if some chapters we're to hard. But you do a good job on the drama. And Yes I already reading hey guys meet my wife. And I have the bodyguard, pending to read it later.

The battel was great but I wish that was more longer.

Yes... That was the best ended chapter. Thanks