I don't think I've ever heard of a bigger marysue in my entire life. Val is oh so *special* that carnivorous monsters who eat anything just automatically become her friends? Are you serious? lol I mean could you LAY it on ANY thicker? Is this one of those fics where its SO bad that its good type of deals? seriously though, wtf

How many times has Val died a come back from the dead

Val I meant Val

Hey if I could make a suggestion what about a story where the oc Vida is like Bert's granddaughter or something

Your doing sequels yay excited.

Also are you into star wars I saw some on the 5 since they said that was star wars day.

Anyway Anakin became Darth Vader and padme gave birth but died.

Not normally into it but it was entertaining?

This whole series is ridiculously overpowered and crossovered I can’t even read it

One last thing when youre making chapters have music backgrounds like when they're at a beach or a tropical resort use destiny island theme for val finding the dinobots omega supreme the frozen predacons and metroplex she would revive them as for unicron have him still evil no good unicron its impossible have val use her golden dragon markings to cleanse all of the dark energon and as for the fallen have him team up with lord thanatos and for val finding her galatria homeworld and cybertron both restored and landing on Pandora have the theme from 2000 dinosaur on all of them

Instead of Jurassic world finding the underground temple how about agent Fowler's military sattilite finds it instead because it is set during the predacon story and have Carl tell them the secret of vals grandmother who was advising the people who made star wars star trek and the x files to keep low profile about any mythical or extraterrestrial anomalies

Two things:

1 when you start the predacons and if you get stuck would you consider posting the first chapter of your other stories?

2 when you start httyd can val be in the fighting but transform into dark twilight and when will twilight turn into her demon form you described on your deviantart picture?

In the Jurassic adventure muraco and aggies children on the age of 10 they would reach the ability to transform into their forms that resembles benwolfs stage 1 transformation and when they're teens and have reached puberty they would transform into stage 2 and when they're adults they would transform into full loboans and instead of Robert Downey Jr have Ben stiller as the voice of the president

That sounds awesome. And wow, astronomy is vals brother blew my mind. U know lord beerus of dragon ball super? Can Val b his friend?

For the last time! Do not make a good Unicron! It's to weird to imagine it! Also, will you make a image of Celestia's mother? The movie only shown her remains.

One last thing in the predacon story use quotes that the autobots and decepticons say from tfp, animated, G1, Live action films (bayformers), war for cybertron and fall of cybertron

I was also wondering about something else when you start your alien vs predator story did you see my idea on how/if you want it to start out?

if not here is what i wrote when the film starts and weyland's team is checking out the satellite picture he tells the people he is not the only one with a satellite over a small island a thousand miles from Antarctica and that others will come maybe Jurassic world has a satellite over there and Simon bring Owen,Claire,Barry and other scientist along with Val,Damien,Quinn,Irelia,Aggie,Gem,Jay,Mike,Angelo(if he will be in story)celestia, and any of the creatures that can survive the cold and they meet Weyland and his team including Alexa who strongly disapproves of children going down to the pyramid but they go down anyway?

in response to Gabriel suggestion if you want to go ahead but during Theodore's transformation he turned into a bully can you not have Val who is sweet and kind go mean and pushy?

that did happen if you want to check it out.