Thank you so much for writing this story. I'm loving it and I already re-read it twice, just so I know I didn't lose any detail.
I think it's a possible future that Madara pictured, but I don't think it'll happenLove this story and I hope you're safe and healthy and that you're going to continue writing this.
Love from Brazil.

I love this story, I really loved the change of bodies, it was fun, I have been working and can not leave comments, sorry.
I'm really intrigued because Team 7 is very close to finding Sakura.
I love that Sakura is small in stature, it's fun to see that, she waited for the next chapter, (sorry for my English, my mother tongue is another)

great chapter!

I'm really sorry this came out late. I haven't been on fanfiction and other social network app aside from facebook and messenger. I've been so busy with work that i almost always spend my time juat listening to music. I even had to stop learning Nihongo (again for the ninth time" but I also want to say that you always blow my mind with your awesomeness in every update because each chapter just exceeds the last one in terms of greatness. This is by far my favorite chapter as for everything it tackled. Loved that we finally saw what the team in present konoha planning on how they could go and get sakura back. That would be one heck of a ride. It was nice to see how they are all in tune to say no to Orochimaru's brand of insanity of an idea haha.
It's a good thing that sasuke managed to draw back hagoromo in their dimension because they are now making progress by knowing which timeline sakura is in! Still a long way to go but hey! It's one step forward.
I also liked the fact that karin here wants to be part of the crew who would retrieve sakura. Most often, other fanfiction writers writes her character bad. I don't hate her nor like her that much but it gets tiring whenever I see fanfiction authors reduced her character to just an overly obsessed sasuke fanatic. Anyway, excited to see her and ino teaming up to get sakura haha.

I'm really loving the mujinas and it only intensifies each chapter i read with them on it. Especially Ubagabi who likes to stay close with sakura haha. Tobirama and his stoic ass face! Really, he couldn't be bothered even when his in front of a treasure trove haha.

We also get some sort of backstory on how the mujinas ended up in the Under. They're definitely something else and someone that should not be left unsupervised. Yeah, what they did was to protect benzaiten but it was kind of extreme so I get the reason why the Gods put them there. Though i still want to see them out and be with sakura haha. Sakura could handle them. She could handle naruto so well. Mujina's are just a much more extreme version of a prankstwr naruto haha.

On a side note, i want the satchel that mio gave sakura! Ah the joy of having a limitless storage in a form a satchel.

Tobirama saying "a new eyesore" "except this one talks" got me laughing so hard lmao. I love sassy tobi and he shows more of that personality when presented with idiotic little shit or someone that annoys him.

Orochi reminds me of orochimaru and can't help that i think of the latter while I read orochi's scene fighting against tobirama and sakura.

I love that ubagabis jumped so fast to sakura's defense when Orochi is claiming that sakura shoulf be his bride ugh. So glad Tobirama is also there. And the lusty snake comment made laugh again haha. A funny but a real fact haha.

The way tobirama handled his new weapon was so damn cool. Love how you vividly described the fight scene and how Sakura and Tobirama worked so seamlessly together. I feel like I'm watching it in my head play.

I really lost it when tobirama's face twisted comically because of the fact that they went all through that shit against Orochi only to have him get back again hahahaha!

Love to see Naoko's squad againd but man! Those samurai's are a huge ass arrogant pricks! If there's a dissent happening between the members. I'm not gonna be surprised. I so love the moment when naoko showed that tokitada who's boss! Toka's also proud. My heart is at peace hahaha.

Oooohhh is this a new love interest for yurine?! Guren looks dashing but he seems to be not getting along with his fellow samurai's considering his ditching them. Hmmmmhh.. He also know Yurine's name without her mentioning it. Suspicious...

It seems that Tobirama earned the respect of the mujina's if they start calling him by his name. Haha
The ending though! Way to finish it with a cliffhanger hahaha! It's kind of a good thing that there's already the next chapter but the orb and twinsplash at the end kind of makes me worried but it also make me think of soul swaping welp...

A really really great chapter! I do think you always exceed readers expectations each time with your update. I'm also thankful over the fact that you put so much love, thought and hardwork to your writing. It shows with how concise and well build up the story is.

Did I mention how much I love your work?! Because this chapter was unbelievable! My emotions kept going up and down like a roller coaster!

From Madara's memories to SakuraTobirama body switch. And that cliff hanger at the end though! Ahhhhh! I want to know more! But I can wait. I Iook forward to your next update whenever you can! Now I'm going to go reread that hot spring chapter in the meantime xD!

just to reference ur note of being under a microscope etc. I just want to say I support you and completely believe you should ignore those people! as a creative outlet/hobby deal goes this is an incredibly well thought out and creative and well written piece of creative fiction! I absolutely LOVE reading this story and truly would be disappointed not to get the chance to finish it! so I hope you don't give up on this story and manage to complete it!

love love love the fic ASiT thank you

Ah, to be a part of Hashirama's inner circle. I love that it didn't matter that he's Hokage, he made visiting his ailing bestie a priority. Madara should consider himself very fortunate he has this man as a friend too. Otherwise, (at the very least) Izuna may have had no one else to confide in about the discontent bubbling up in the Uchiha clan. Plus, who better to witness the subterfuge firsthand? The frustration from his clansman's audacity was palpable, but even so Izuna displayed his mettle well. It always thrills me to see his passionate side come out too :D Also, what an impressive hypothesis he made as to the probable reason for his brother's condition! Nevertheless, the sudden divine interest in his family no doubt has him weary. It must have been a complete mindf*ck for Izuna to have confirmation that he shouldn't have survived Tobirama's attack though. A mercy yes, but why? If it's one thing these Gods have shown, it's that there's no such thing as something for nothing. Something Madara can personally attest to. Speaking of the Uchiha clan head, at least he has thoughts of Sakura to keep him company in his comatose mindscape. Probably a lot less confusing than having deja vu for memories that have yet to even happen, in any event.

And I'm positive that I just read the single most embarrassing scenario in all of Naruto fan fiction! Oh, the literal humanity! The body swap was made even more hilarious for me because I was literally just thinking about what they would do if nature called in such unfamiliar terrain. And despite what they may have thought, the mujina were NOT helping either! The part that I absolutely lost it at though was when Sakura wondered where "it" ended. XD Dear Gods, I just couldn't stop laughing. I half expected Tobirama to actually "take matters into his own hands" and solve the problem himself, regardless of being in Sakura's body. Not gonna lie, I somehow thought he would have been going commando too. But alas, Tobirama Senju is buttoned up to a fault. At least the switching back process gave him a bit of the human contact that he so desperately needs.

And WHOA, I was not expecting "Cat" to be SANNA FREAKING UCHIHA! No wonder Tobirama lost his will to fight! Shit, that just completely threw me for a loop. Now I'm wondering about the circumstances of his "death" years ago. And how this newly discovered information will affect the current Uchiha clan. I know they are known to carry ages old mad-ons, but to the point of hiding his survival for so long? There has to be more to it,(especially with the involvement of deities) but the reckless destruction he was all too glad to engage the town in speaks volumes of his single-mindedness. I mean, can Sanna even be reasoned with at this point? Does he even know about the ceasefire between the Senju and Uchiha or the formation of Konoha? I'd like to think these particulars might effect his plans of revenge, but it takes a special type of enragement to mow down innocent civilians without a second thought. The story of which, I'd very much like to read :)

I kinda cant wait hopefully for Tobirama to realize that when he returns that while he is on this trip the other 3 have all decided to pursue her while he adamantly rejects her mere presence though likely deep down feels for her and won't simply allow it but hey competition and jealousy and both equally strong motivators to make him swallow his pride and words hopefully

Applause, cheering, clapping, I apply all to your story and writing! It really is just well done and thought out. The dedication you have for this story comes through in your well written and detailed writing. I haven't reviewed on every chapter, but really wanted to give a shout out now. So, I really am impressed and enjoy this story! For such long chapters, I do hope another update comes out soon.

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and it is good that they got out and it is interesting what is happening to Madara

Ok solo diré que me encanta ... Es el primero que me leo uno con este tipo de emparejamiento y es un tipo nuevo de trama que me engancha no te preocupes cuánto tardes mientras continué pero me a surgido la duda ... Ya que Naruto y Sasuke y otros más planean rescatar a Sakura, lo lograrán, se toparan con todo este caos que hay, que pensaran estos 4 sujetos que ya se plantean su forma de mirar a Sakura, se quedaran varados ... Dios todo está muy interesante ya quiero ver qué pasa en el que sigue

god damn itthis is pure gold they're so cute, I cant wait for more progress, there's a lot of things you can add to build them up more with the huge time gap from the original story you made. take care 3

Thank you for the wonderful updates!

after a long hiatus from ff due to RL i re-read this fic again and was enthralled, so happy everytime the baby went down that i could read. It is a monstrosity of a fic in depth, character development and plot. Can't wait for more and while the slow burn is prefect i can't wait for romance too x x