This is truly special. An excellent depiction of the path Madoka's World took before the Rebellion.

came back for a reread, still wonderful. if you ever need a break from infinity, I would love to see a post-rebelluon resolution to this. thank you again for sharing your writing with us! it is so wonderful to read the works of such a compassionate spirit

wow. just wow. so beautiful

This is amazing and I have decided that you are the kind of writer who has consistently good amazingness and canon expansion no matter what. I could be biased.

The tale is brilliant! There is much more given to the readers than just a 'glimpse' of Madokami's mind. The descriptions of the varied scenes entice the reader without being overwhelming. Using the Brocken Spectre is a cool idea and is effective as well. The characters Madoka, Walburga, Sayaka and Nagisa are well-fleshed, even with a 5000 word count. A must read after watching the series.

This was sooo good. I hope you do a sequel some time with a happy ending even if it deviates from Rebellion's ending.

Pretty good. I enjoyed it. BTW, did you read he fic 'Salvation, or mercy?'? Very interesting concept, unfortunately it stalled right as it was getting REALLY good.

So... this is a thing

A very good thing, if a bit sad, but then I'd expect no less

Well this was a lovely little thing to read.

First review here!

It's always nice to see a work from you, even if it's not your main work.

It is quite nice to see what sort of view Madoka see from her goddess form yet from her "human" side too. Not only that but Walburga get to be part of the story which is quite uncommon to see here in PMMM fiction works. It would be interesting to see what the rest of the retired magical girls plus Walburga would do when they witnessed the rise of Akuma Homura and the "fall" of the Goddess Madoka. It's just a thought shared with you.

Looking forward to your main story's newest chapter soon!