Great story so far

Didn't see that coming

Great chapter

Loved it

Nice Chapter

Love it

I like that part at the end that you used from el dorado that was between John Wayne and Robert Mitchum

Hi, I really love this. This is one of the most gripping extra child of Robert fic I've read so far. Very original plotlines, with his relationship with both his father and Tywin. I also love your characterisation of Tyrek and Harry.

How is he lord of the westerlands the crownland and the stormland? The Westeralnds are Tywins and by the laws of inheritance Tyrions after his. The stormlands are Renlys and his kids after him. The crownlands are from the crown not the second prince.

I'm very curious how you came to this decision or is it just to make him seem more awesome? Because the obession to make your protagonist seem more and more awesome is what killed the Bruce story.

This chapter made no sense I trust you to turn it around, but Robert seemed out of character accusing his favorite son of a crime he had no motive for and no evidence pointing to him seems dumb

Lame.

What!?

The fuck is wrong with the king?

Im not sure how to feel about this story anymore I always like a True born Baratheon story but in this chapter it was just weird. There's maybe in the other chapters but since it's been awhile since you updated I have forgotten but Robert besting his own son and declaring he murdered Jon Arryn just seems out of place like you are rushing it and just trying to cause a problem for no reason I don't know but this chapter wasn't one of your best works seems like you can do with more planning but at the same time you already take so long to update you first posted this story May 3rd and only have 4 chapters I had actually forgotten about it till I went back and searched for OC baratheon stories.

Hello. This is a nice story, thanks for your work. Love