Uhh.. Zim pissed off everything and everyone at some point in time

Behold, GIR is the one with common sense

*smacks Zim on the noggin*
*smacks Dib on the noggin*

This was a very funny story! Poor Dib, nobody ever believes him. It is almost like his life is part of a funny television show!

"What's going on over there?" The tumour lady asked her husband.

"Probably filming a movie." The leg-less man shrugs "It's probably low budget too, those costumes look terrible."

"Um-hum."

This part just made me laugh so hard for some reason! Like I could totally imagine it happening!

I thought that it was very funny and in character when Gaz defeated the entire armada. I do wonder how GIR got on board the ship. So the tallest were covered in cheese and he ate them? Wow.

I wonder how Dib felt about Zim and his sister dating, though I suppose he wouldn’t be able to say much about it if he didn’t want to die.

Good job, and keep up the good work!

Oh dear. Gir, no! That's not nice, no matter how terrible the Tallest are!
That part really made for a laugh. Hahaha.

But dearie me, there really is no stopping Gaz, is there? Earth will be safe for an eternity with her around.

Nice job on this one!

I get some strange amusement out of watching Zim and Gaz butt heads all day. This chapter was very action-packed and very interesting. And lol, Gaz is so badass!

Brilliant. Loved every little bit.

Nice one here. :) And of course, Dib can never catch a break.

While I was reading this, I was reminded of Ashi's fight in the most recent episode of Samurai Jack. Then I read your ending note, LOL! XD

This was hilarious!

What a cheesy way to the eternal chew toy.

Well, I liked it!

Oh God can't breath this is funny as hell

Horrifying but also really cute. Enjoyable combination! And great humorous dialogue, too.

Not much to say other then me going insane with laughter after finishing this. Keep Up the Great Work

Thanks
King Plasma of Plasmadom

Absolutely loved it. I liked the little nods to the comics, and the Tallest's fate, but Gaz vs the Irkens was by far the best part of the whole story. You know, I saw that Samurai Jack episode and yes, I both got the reference right away and agree that it was badass. Definitely something Gaz could do if motivated enough.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Brilliant Story I J, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this little short story, I do think that your punctuation could be a bit better. In most of the character's actions done after a line, there's supposed to be a period after those lines like at the end there: "Oh Come on!" He yelled exasperatedly."Can't I ever get a break?" Just a little detail I've noticed as I read. Still, great story as always.

Yep, I can totally see Gaz being a badass bitch killing the Irkens just like Ashi did on that Samurai Jack episode. GIR in the end though made the icing on the cake. This was a good read.