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NymphadoraHufflepuff chapter 3 . 6/5 There is soooo cute! Gorgeous ! |
ObsessedWithRomione chapter 5 . 5/30 Great chapter. Loved this fic so much. Their first time was very realistic. I just had a thought, what if between forth and fifth chapter something happened to Ron like in one of TMBlue's story 7 Years 6 Months and 4 Days. Hermione will be so heartbroken. |
ObsessedWithRomione chapter 4 . 5/30 Great chapter. Poor Ron. I am glad that Hermione convinced him that it was her fears and not him. Glad that a talk from Harry made her see a bigger picture. |
ObsessedWithRomione chapter 3 . 5/30 The letters are really cute. Loved it. Mr. 'We've Forgotten Someone!' This me me smile. |
ObsessedWithRomione chapter 2 . 5/30 So good so far. Hermione way of thoughts are understandable but my heart hurt for Ron. He was so supportive, I love him. |
ObsessedWithRomione chapter 1 . 5/30 Great Start. The reasons Hermione give was just like her. Her logical mind. |
K chapter 5 . 3/7 A nice story. |
Anikuni chapter 2 . 10/15/2017 Maybe it is stupid thing but Hermione has never said first I love you, she always said I love you too. Igual want her to express more her feelings. |
Aloemilk chapter 5 . 7/8/2017 Very realistic, nice characterization. Really liked it! |
Aloemilk chapter 3 . 7/8/2017 "my dad would like me to ask you about microwaves and why they're so much faster at cooking when they're smaller than ovens." Lmao. Both letters were adorable! |
Aloemilk chapter 2 . 7/8/2017 This is so good so far! I like how you are writing them... and if you knew how picky I am, you would know how rare that is! |
Catherine Garden chapter 5 . 7/7/2017 love this story indeed |
OrangeLovePerson chapter 5 . 6/15/2017 This really is amazing, I'm glad you posted it! :) There are just so many fanfictions out there about absolutely perfect first times, and I think it's refreshing to find stories like this one, now and again, where realistic troubles appear and get solved by love and trust. Great message! Still, I personally could imagine that the whole long-distance-relationship-thing might cause a bit more yearning between the two of them? Although their lives keep them busy, I kind of felt like time flew by a bit fast for them, in this, since their freshly in love, and everything. The "Wizard of Oz" part was awesome! And I love how gentle you describe them, towards each other, and their conversations in general. Will definitely read more from you! :) |
idearlylovealaugh chapter 5 . 6/13/2017 This is a lovely ending! I loved how tentative and awkward they both were, and that the story ended with them talking about their experience. It was all very realistic and sweet! |
AzureAlquimista chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 Blake If you don't like my review, then don't read it. simple as that. Another thing... If you are unable to understand plain English, it would be better for you to not try to answer something you can't understand... As this is not a forum, this conversation is finished... if you want to discuss my freedom to review as I think is right, send a private message. |