No no. These are each individual of each other and anything. Like... I look at a bunch of one-shot series as like a collection of 'in an alternate scenario or reality' kind of deals.

Is this side story cannon your other story?

The 'Current Chapter' in the description tends to be behind when updating. Putting it out there.

Erm... That was the author talking to you Guest. Read it before writing or else anything you say won't be heard cause you'll look like an idiot.

Though I do have to agree with his view on some level. Author, you say you've gotten tons of readers but that's not truth at all. You barely got more than 12 followers and your review page is a flame war. I do have to admit it feels like a waste to see potential ignored by the community because you enjoy something nobody cares about. Eventually you'll write 50,000 words and nobody will give a damn. Then you'll ask yourself if it was worth it or not.

I know you said you do it because you enjoy it but I've heard that far too many times and it's never truth. If it was then you wouldn't be publishing here anyway cause the satisfaction of seeing your work in a Word Document finished is more than enough. Unless you were trying to catch attention which is your case here I presume.

Anyway my message to you will be to drop it or level up. If you truly don't care then feel free to ignore me. Nothing bad will come out of it no matter how isolated your fic might feel.

See? Yet another person who only leaves a review to respond to me. Not a single fan of yours. If I hadn't say anything, you'll still have 1 review.

They can say whatever they want but the truth is if people liked OCs then you'll have fans. But you don't. So stop wasting time with OCs and write RWBY characters.

Hey, hey... calm down. Let's just agree to disagree. You, "Guest" don't like OCs being in the mix. Oh well, not my problem. Not trying to sound like an ass, just writing what I want, seeing as a whole bunch of others do so anyway, to answer your first review. Few write an actual story and then an alternate collection. Very many also read those collections as well. As for what a review is, anything goes. You see top movies where critics just essentially say, "Funny". There's nothing really constructive cause it doesn't change anything. Movie's already out, not like they can change it. I mean, here, I could, but I don't wanna. As of today, this story's gotten tons of people to read all of the chapters versus just one. Wants of the many outweigh the one. So, I would appreciate it if you could leave maybe a positive comment for at least for the OG chapters if you like them. I can't make you, it just makes this place look like a flame wall that I know most everyone doesn't enjoy looking at. The description tells you OCs involved for some chapters,, so you went in knowing that fact, just saying. Hope everyone can enjoy the content they read for, regardless of anything anyone, myself included, says.

Btw that last review is lying. He doesn't enjoy your OC, he just enjoys acting like the hero and telling you his opinion is best than others. Typical reviewer. I mean if he really enjoyed it then why didn't he leave an actual review instead of a response to my comment huh?

He didn't even say anything constructive. All he said was "cool story bro". How is that a "review" at all?

This is half a review and half a response to a previous review. I personally think that having your OC character on these writings is a good choice. I really enjoyed reading about Munsell and he's really grown on me. To the person who left te previous review, if you want any other writing with all canon characters, there is a million other (trash) writings out there. This is one of the better ones, so let it be.

Also, I really enjoyed this last chapter(chap. 4). It's probably my favorite so far. Thank you for not opening with "and then the started fucking." there is far to much of that already. Though I do dislike the idea of an interspecies relationship, key word species, this was able to push my bias aside to enjoy what you've done. Keep up the great work.

Dude, who the fuck wants to read OCs banging the RWBY cast? Your only review is about the Arkos chapter but the rest was ignored. Why you think that is?

This was more than I expected and I love it.