Reviews for The Magic within
Lucifera Santanico chapter 6 . 4/29
Ahhh! I love this so much! I really wish this would be updated
Lysab9113 chapter 6 . 8/7/2018
Please update soon and please don’t let Joseph die
Mickey1996 chapter 6 . 7/29/2018
I really hope you update soon! i only have one question and that is wheres JoeJoe! is he still gonna be in there or will he make it out? please i must know!
icedshadows chapter 6 . 5/21/2018
...sjhn,esnkjbn akbkknlblkkARRGGGG!
MIND BLOW!
...good story...
Guest chapter 6 . 2/7/2018
Loved it it’s a rare pair that’s perfect so is Ruvik gonna come out in sabastians mind or Leslie’s like the game keep going your doing great
Mickey chapter 6 . 1/23/2018
I also have a topic to bring up... Jojo! Whats happening with Jojo!
Mickey chapter 6 . 1/20/2018
I really really love this story! Please please update Asap! I hope you move the story into the evil within 2! It would be so awesome if Ruvic and Harry help sebastian get his family back! Please please i beg of you to update as soon as possible!
AliceCullen3 chapter 6 . 11/19/2017
LOVE IT!
dracula2000 chapter 6 . 11/3/2017
Yeah, it was great! I really want to know what happen so next cause I’m curious about Ruvik did he quite literally take over leslies’s Body or is he like a poltergeist that can interact with the physical world or will Harry someone grow his boy back? I need answers! Anyway can’t wait for the next update!
TheMarphasChappers chapter 6 . 11/2/2017
I liked this chapter very much and I love the interaction between Ruvik and Harry together with Sebastian's reactions to them both together, lol.
kagewolf25 chapter 2 . 11/2/2017
BRILLIANTLY MAGNIFICENT LOVED IT
MorganicOrganic chapter 6 . 11/2/2017
Papa Sebastian is best Sebastian
kagewolf25 chapter 6 . 11/2/2017
FANTASTICALLY MAGNIFICENT
LuckyNumber1 chapter 6 . 11/1/2017
...I like the story, it's good, but a little rushed, I feel like you skipped like major character development, and just shacked them up so you could get to the good parts lol. It just made Ruvik cringy, like super cringy, however, I will read this to the end, only because of the fact that while it is rushed, the idea of Harry and Ruvik being a thing, plus some of the scenes were very well written out, only to be lost among some character scenes that made me think if it was real life, people would like to walk a whole building to avoid them lol Seriously, though, it does have it's charm, so while it does need some work, it could have been a whole lot worse lol
MsBloodlove chapter 5 . 10/26/2017
Oh my God! Must have MOAR! I live the idea of Hp/evil within crossover, and I'm so glad your doing one! Going great so far and I can't wait for more chapters. Thanks for your hard work hun!
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