| Reviews for Take the Plunge |
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  Annastasia12 chapter 14 . 9/22/2018 I really enjoyed your story. The NFL and Stroh, that was nice. Thank you! |
 GrammyIda chapter 14 . 7/30/2017 Very perfect ending! |
| sweethregz1 chapter 14 . 7/30/2017 Oh I love it! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/30/2017 Thanks for a great story. So sad it's over now, but can't wait to read the next one! |
| IReadAndWriteSometimes chapter 14 . 7/29/2017 Since I can't PM you, I would like to address the guest reviewer confused by Provenza's wedding. It was a complete blunder on my part. I had so many things to keep track of, that the start of my story completely vanished from my memory. I have corrected it now, so that it should all be making sense now. Thank you for pointing it out! I can't believe I made such a huge mistake. I apologize and hope you still enjoyed the story. |
| Amy chapter 14 . 7/29/2017 I was hoping for her to stay with the NFL, just for something different since this is just a story rather than an actual show storyline. And because she hadn't really been able to properly experience her new chapter in life yet, thanks to the Stroh stuff. However, all the reasons Sharon came back are why in "reality" she never took the NFL job in the first place, so it makes perfect sense. You did a great job with her internal deliberations, and I love that Andy was just one of numerous factors rather than The Reason. I also really enjoyed Provenza all but begging to be demoted. He's an outstanding detective and incident commander. He's not meant to be a captain, though. It is completely believable to me that he'd want to take the cut in pay and authority in order to get back to doing what he enjoys. (Yes, he wanted the job when Brenda first left, but after all this time working for Sharon, who gives him much more responsibility than Brenda ever did, he'd feel differently.) Nice job! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/29/2017 I'm so lost! I thought this whole story started with Provenza's wedding. How is it that they just got married 10 days ago here? Did I miss something? |
| Abydosorphan chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Love it! And can't wait to see what the two of you have hiding up your sleeves! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 This was a great story. All good things much come to and end I guess. Thanks for sharing your talent with the fans of MC. |
| Ilovedesserts chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Loved the story and the return of Lieutenant Provenza! |
| maidenpride chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Great story glad she went back to the LAPD and got her stars. Now for a new twist on what you just wrote - Andy gets an offer to be head of security for the LA Dodgers! Can't wait (literally bated breath) to see the results of your collaboration, |
| MaxiP99 chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Can't wait for your new story ! Loved this ! |
| seaford71 chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Awesome story and sad it had to end |
| xbleeple chapter 14 . 7/28/2017 Ahhhh! This was such a good ending, I loved it. It was absolutely perfect! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2017 Great chapter! This is such a fun story, i love how it's been unfolding. Can't wait to find out what Mason wants.. |
