Reviews for The Long Journey
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
Oh my gosh! I smiled and laughed the whole time reading this! I enjoyed this story very much! It Brought back so many memories of the show and I loved all the new stories you woven in as apart of the show! I loved Amanda's Journal! You did a Amazing, Outstanding job of writing this! Superb, brilliant, excellent genius! I love it! :)
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
A long journey, yes, through Amanda's thoughts and journal, but worthwhile because there are great moments such as:

Lee going through the Agency Security Assessment Amanda compiled was absolutely hysterical ... pure genius! Lee: "So, as the Agent of Record, do you have any suggestions as to how I might raise my score?" Oh my, I've turned into a howler monkey, screaming with laughter!

Oh boy, now she's really getting to Lee: "Amanda, can we move to the couch? I don't know how much longer my legs are going to hold me up."

Another great line from Lee: "Darling, are we playing 'normal people' tonight?"
WhiteFeather1965 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Absolutely brilliant and poignant. Loved the Charlie's Angels reference. Thank you for sharing this beautiful journey through Amanda's life and the amazing insight into her feelings for Lee.
cyndergator chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
This was really so very good! I really enjoyed it so much. You are a great SMK writer! Hey when are you going to let us know what's in the rest of Amanda's journal for Season 4 and even Season 1 and 2 :)
Alittleromance chapter 1 . 3/9/2001
Incredible! Your story started out great and just kept building to a fabulous end. The memories you evoked were so much fun. I loved Amanda's point of view - perfect characterization. It was just so REAL. I can't thank you enough for creating such a wonderful story. I will read anything you write.
Fletcher Stanton chapter 1 . 1/13/2001
This is an absolutely amazing piece! It weaves through the series beautifully, and fills in some of the gaps perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing it.
aJenT chapter 1 . 1/9/2001
I've read tons of fan fiction and this is the first time I've ever written a review. I wouldn't actually call this a reveiw though, it's more of a RAVE! I absolutely loved this story-everything about it. When the show was on, I could never get enough of the near misses and almost kisses-you brought all of that back for me and kept me on the edge of my seat throughout your story. Even though I knew you wouldn't let them kiss until All the World's A Stage, I read and read like I was watching all new episodes for the first time.

You are a very talented writer and I think you did a great job staying within the canon of the show. I could actually hear Lee and Amada talking.

This story was wonderful, please take us back to Amanda's journal again. I'm dying for more!

Jen
ghostwriter 70 chapter 1 . 12/10/2000
I'm goo...absolute goo. This was a simply fantastic story, which accomplished a number of things, effortlessly (or it at least it appeared effortless). 1) You managed to take us through Amanda's complete third season thought process so that we say how, when and WHY she fell in love with Lee. And 2) you explained how they went a WHOLE year without kissing! You explored some very interesting and untapped themes in this story, especially her memory for Fast Food for Thought, it was an angle I had never considered. It was that kind of moment, combined with the additional near-misses and Amanda's frustration that made for such a wonderfully layered and textured story. Finally, you managed to stay in Amanda's head only, but still tell part of Lee's story - well done!
Sandra Engley chapter 1 . 12/5/2000
This has been the most original idea, combining a journal or actual events that all of us have seen along with the thoughts and feelings that preceded or occured immediately afterwards.

There was a lot of original insight,true to character and original story line showing the trust and bond between them.

You added more playful sceens,Which led to the very humorous fight over the remote control, and some De Ja Vu.,

Thank you very much. It was a very thorough review of the entire third year.
Lori chapter 1 . 12/3/2000
What a great companion to the 3rd season!
Cobra Death Grip chapter 1 . 12/2/2000
WOW! - This story is ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! You must, I repeat, MUST do something similar with season four. It's obvious that you put a lot of time and thought into this story and you really did a fabulous job. I, as well as the rest of the anxious readers, are looking forward to your continuation! Thanks for the awesome job!
katie chapter 1 . 11/30/2000
you did a wonderful job here. the scene fillers fit perfectly. i like how you wrote for the devoted fan, only needing a few select words and the it was understood what ep you were using. funniest part was the tv show discussion. please write more for her diary. i love to see how she reflects on season 4. thank you :)
MaryM chapter 1 . 11/30/2000
Wow! I loved what you did with Season Three. You took all the scenes that fans would have liked to see played out further on screen, and wrote them into a wonderful story. I'm sure the TV writers couldn't have done it is as well as you. Bravo! Please give us more Scarecrow and Mrs. King fanfiction. Rating a very big 10!
Jennie chapter 1 . 11/29/2000
How true, how true. Some things never really do change. Great story.
Julie chapter 1 . 11/29/2000
What a wonderful, sweet story. You really handled the characters perfectly. I printed it out so that I can read it again. Your story seamed together perfectly with the episodes and you had just the right balance of romance without too much sacharine. PERFECT!
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