I really love this story !

Fantastic story. I like their banter.
Cheers
Maya

WTF?!
.EVER.

Finally I manage to write you your well deserved review!
I really liked the story, which is surprising as I'm normally not a fan of stories where the... ahem... "action" takes place too soon and then reading your first chapter... well. Strangely, I did not think it out of character, and I can't really say how you managed it but congratulations for that :) Then there is the scene itself: writing explicit stuff is difficult, and writing it well without it being too, well... cheap, is one of the most difficult things to write, in my opinion. You did that well, although I think the scene in the later chapters is even better. Now, the story itself... well, I thought Kaito's drama attitudes were a bit too much, but still understandable and it was fun to read. I especially liked the action in the end with Snake and all, although the little twist with the gun on the ground was quite forseeable and actually a bit unlikely for two clever guys like them but beside that it was a well written action scene (which is another, in my opinion VERY hard thing to write) - maybe it resolved a bit too fast, with too little consequences, but that is probably personal taste. I like to make my characters suffer a bit once in a while, especially in longer stories :D I liked how you involved the Japanese attitude towards homosexuality which is often missing is slash stories, although I did miss a bit of personal struggle, at least for Shinichi. For someone who has been in love with a girl for so long, he accepted to suddenly like guys better awfully quickly, I think. That much for criticism, but I still liked the story a lot (although I do like your next one better :D) and enjoyed reading it, especially in the later chapters, where the style was, I don't know... smoother, like you were more comfortable with it than in the beginning. I don't know, that was a least my impression. I liked how you portrayed the two characters and how they interacted. It was sort of natural, despite the for them new territory, and I absolutely loved Aoko :D
So, well done and I'm very much looking forward to your new story :)

It cant end yet! Snake has been captured. And i want to see everyone reaction.

Sin is always appreciated( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

As expected, a cliffhanger... but really really well written, as always
Hope you won't need as much time to write the next chapter, I'm aching for moooooooooore!

Yay! new chappie! You will die if you dare to kill Shin-chan or Kai-chan!

OMG! I love your story!
It's amazing!
Please don't make them suffer! T.T
I want a happy ending. They need to be happy!
I'll wait for the next chapter!

OMG! I love your story! I really really love your story!
I yelled with all those messages between them 3 I mean, they will have a date! :D
I was going to comment when I finished to read all the current chapters, but I couldn't. The story is too good and I needed to say it to you! It's amazing!
Please keep writing!
PD: English is my second language, so please forgive my mistakes :)
Thank you for writting this!

omsss drama... tho i wonder how they got him... hm... well hope we will know in next chap

Hohohooo.. Nice chap... It is great that he told him truth

XD
What a dream they may have given Aoko, if not a show!

*snickers*
Oh dear, Kaito will have to be extra careful to dodge the soccer balls this time - Shinichi will be putting his all into them because at minimum scaring the crap out of him with what breaks from the stray balls will be cathartic.

Great chapter, I'm glad everything worked out between them! Ruin it?! :( Please don't make them break up again! They deserve happiness!