Reviews for Hold Me Down
Guest chapter 6 . 10/19/2019
Update soon please
Kissyfur85 chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
12, 12, lots of 12! ;)
Nice story so far
bored411 chapter 6 . 2/10/2019
i say do whatever episode you'll have the most fun with next :) great chapter though and i'm curious to see which one you decide on next.
bored411 chapter 5 . 8/7/2018
awesome stuff. can't wait to see where she ends up next and how things go for her, especially when things get a little more dangerous ;) so i hope you update this soon! i love it so far!
Anthaea chapter 5 . 6/19/2018
Love the story so far! Each chapter is nice is nice combination of enough information but not too much detail. Sometimes the dialogue gets a little confusing as to who’s saying what but the last two chapters had definitely improved upon that! Totally relate to Klary too with having those negativity thought patterns due to past traumas too. It’s very comforting to see that in her character and this story :)
Spazzy13 chapter 5 . 6/2/2018
Klary is an amazing character! I like that she's doubting herself but is still strong... it makes her feel more real.
Keep up the good work as this is an awesome take on the Whovian time-skipper trope!
Kaylala.BooksandCandy chapter 5 . 5/27/2018
Loved it! Your writing style is really good :)
Kaylala.BooksandCandy chapter 4 . 5/25/2018
Update again soon plz :) I really like this story
DiamondRose-413 chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
its a great story and I can't wait for more!
tiarna13 chapter 4 . 3/14/2018
Finally!

Still really enjoy your writing and your take on a girl stuck in his timeline. Can't wait for the next chapter Hun!
Rosealyn chapter 4 . 3/11/2018
I like this story, it's pretty cool, but in this chapter you forgot about her hands, you know how they got pretty much melted in the last chapter.
Sexx chapter 3 . 1/22/2018
Please update more soon love reading these storys xx
SnowKi chapter 2 . 10/5/2017
more pleaz
frosty600 chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
Ooh great start. :)
Kaylala.BooksandCandy chapter 2 . 8/3/2017
I'm really starting to like this :) I love the "jumping through the doctors time line" stories! I'm really glad I found one that is just starting! You write very well, keep up the great work!

Stay classy :)
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